The Real Writing Process of Temi Oh
Tom Pepperdine interviews Temi Oh about her writing process. Temi discusses which books have really helped her with plotting; what she's learned from working in a TV writer's room, and how she coped with imposter syndrome when on a panel with Neil Gaiman.
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Transcript
Hello and welcome to The Real Writing Process.
Tom:I'm your host, Tom Pepperdine.
Tom:And this episode, my guest is the writer, Temi Oh.
Tom:Now, I'm going to start this episode with telling you actually
Tom:how she became a guest on the show because Temi was a recommendation.
Tom:She was recommended to me, that I read her, by the wonderful science
Tom:fiction author, Emma Newman.
Tom:Former guest of the show.
Tom:Now, Emma, in my opinion, is one of the best science
Tom:fiction writers writing today.
Tom:So when she recommends someone, you take notice and my
Tom:expectations were pretty damn high.
Tom:Gotta be honest, Temi just blew me away.
Tom:Absolutely surpassed expectation.
Tom:Her debut novel, Do You Dream Of Terra Two?
Tom:It's just one of the greatest debuts I've ever read.
Tom:It's one of those books that I actually had to pause every
Tom:now and then just to process.
Tom:Like all the ideas and it's just phenomenal.
Tom:I was so impressed and blown away that I just went and started
Tom:following her on social media with a view to get on the show.
Tom:What I was not prepared for was Tammy to immediately follow me
Tom:back and tell me she's already a listener and fan of the show.
Tom:I just...
Tom:I've only at this point released 12 episodes and been
Tom:going for like three months.
Tom:So it just blows me away how many incredibly talented people are listeners.
Tom:And I'm talking about you.
Tom:Thank you very much.
Tom:Um, anyway.
Tom:So we secured the interview.
Tom:This is back in January of 2022.
Tom:And Temi's working on a second novel, she's working on a bunch of exciting
Tom:projects that haven't been announced.
Tom:So she can't tell me what they're called, but I know that they're big.
Tom:And your in the future listening to this, so they may have been announced
Tom:by the time you're listening.
Tom:Um, we discuss them on the show, but in the abstract, nothing's named.
Tom:So I have no idea what she's actually working on whereas
Tom:you, the listener, probably do.
Tom:So this is the interview before Temi got famous.
Tom:I have no doubt in my mind Temi gets famous.
Tom:And I have no doubt that you're listening because Temi's now become
Tom:the name that Temi deserves to be.
Tom:I'm just blown away I got to interview her when I did.
Tom:Anyway, enough of me waffling on my own.
Tom:Let's have some warm waffle and laughter with Temi herself.
Tom:Hello again, and I'm very pleased to say that my guest joining me today is Temi Oh.
Tom:Hello, Temi.
Temi:Hi.
Tom:Hi.
Tom:And a little shy there.
Tom:It's alright.
Tom:we'll coax you out.
Temi:(laughs) Maybe I wasn't close enough to the camera.
Tom:No, no, that's fine.
Tom:My first question as always is what are we drinking?
Temi:Uh, matcha tea right now.
Temi:Yeah.
Temi:I like mine with lots of milk and sugar.
Temi:I've heard that that's like the way that you shouldn't drink
Temi:it, if you really love matcha.
Tom:Yeah.
Tom:I think that's the same with a lot of hot drinks.
Tom:It's like milky sugary tea.
Temi:I actually realized the thing that I like to taste of is something that tastes
Temi:a little bit like a sweet milkshake.
Temi:So if you can make my coffee taste as much like a milkshake
Temi:as possible, that's what I want.
Temi:And it's the same with my match.
Temi:So maybe I actually just liked the taste of milk and sugar?
Tom:I actually, I must confess my wife loves matcha so much that I got
Tom:her to make this for me this morning.
Tom:It does taste like a warm milkshake.
Tom:So she made it spot on.
Temi:Nice.
Temi:She's doing it the right way.
Tom:And we've got a milk frother as well, so she's like, I'll
Tom:make an extra frothy for you.
Temi:That's the best.
Temi:Yeah.
Temi:You've leveled up.
Temi:As soon as I got it, a milk frother.
Tom:So is this your, is this a comfort drink for you?
Tom:Is this what you like to drink when writing?
Temi:So I actually love coffee.
Temi:Since I was like well, yeah, like 18, 19.
Temi:I had this ritual of as soon as I finished my coffee after work.
Temi:So now whenever I sit down, I feel like I have to be drinking something.
Temi:And I guess it's just my habit of finish my coffee and then I'll focus.
Temi:But I got COVID around Christmas time and suddenly my coffee tasted, like I dunno
Temi:like petrol, just like really horrible.
Temi:Uh, yeah, because people say that you're taste changes.
Temi:And the only thing I noticed was that coffee tasted bad to me, which was sad.
Temi:But my mother-in-law had given me some matcha for Christmas and I just,
Temi:I don't know, I had it a couple of times and just felt like it tasted
Temi:like pond water, but then I added lots of milk and sugar and was like, this
Temi:is the delicious, comforting drink.
Temi:And what I like is that from what I've read, the caffeine released is a bit
Temi:slower, so you don't get very jittery.
Temi:You just feel alert like a long time instead of having
Temi:a, like a burst of caffeine.
Temi:Especially, since I drink so much of it, I'm just, I'm going to try
Temi:and drink more matcha than coffee.
Tom:Yeah.
Tom:So what's your current matcha:coffee ratio on a day-to-day, how many cups?
Temi:Oh at the moment I have maybe three or four cups of just matcha.
Temi:I've made the transition.
Temi:But if I go to a coffee store to work, I'll have a coffee.
Temi:Yeah.
Temi:Especially because several times I said, do you have matcha?
Temi:And they look at me like, okay, princess.
Temi:(laughs)
Tom:It's my small town vibes, I just assumed London, it's all like that.
Tom:It's all sort of 12 different milk varieties.
Tom:So do you prefer to write at home because on your Instagram you've been
Tom:posting about your writing cupboard.
Tom:Has that, does that feel like your creative space now?
Tom:Or do you still like going out when you can?
Temi:Yeah, I actually, I think this is a lockdown thing, cause I used
Temi:to love working in coffee stores.
Temi:Actually my favorite places are coffee stores that are in bookstores.
Temi:So like the one in Piccadilly, the Waterstones there I really like.
Temi:The top floor of Foyles on Charing Cross Road are all places
Temi:that like I work pretty often.
Temi:And then obviously like during lockdown I couldn't do it and then we moved house.
Temi:So I was just trying to find ways to be productive.
Temi:I was working in this area right now, which is our living room kitchen.
Temi:Um, but the thing is, I don't know, I just feel like there's
Temi:just so many distractions.
Temi:I'll just look at the kitchen counter and think, oh, (dog
Temi:barks) there's a chore to do.
Tom:And there's a pluto.
Temi:And there's a dog, yeah.
Temi:I might just put her outside, otherwise she'll keep distracting the interview.
Tom:Okay.
Tom:Pluto i s a small Jack Russell crossed with a Poodle.
Tom:Absolutely adorable.
Tom:It was my insistence that she stayed in the room and it's come back to bite me.
Temi:Sorry.
Tom:That's okay.
Temi:Yeah.
Temi:So yeah.
Tom:So yes, it's distracting and we've proven that.
Tom:(laughs)
Temi:I know, on cue (laughs).
Temi:Um, yeah so, um, when we moved, we had this cupboard under the stairs and I'd
Temi:spent ages figuring out where would be the best place to work where had good light.
Temi:And then I dunno, yeah, in the end I just chose the cupboard because I figured
Temi:it's like the one space in the house that doesn't have to be anything else.
Temi:Like I have a desk in my bedroom.
Temi:It's also my bedroom.
Temi:This is the London flat, so everything has to be something um, whereas
Temi:this covered under the stairs, it could just be the writing space.
Temi:So I made it really like maximalist and gorgeous.
Temi:I don't know if I like to post it on Instagram because I'm so proud of it.
Tom:I will put a link to the instagram on the podcast.
Tom:And I think on Twitter, we might do a shot of the space as well.
Temi:Yeah.
Temi:I covered the walls in wallpaper, I got from paper chase.
Temi:Not wallpaper, sorry, wrapping paper.
Tom:Oh the wrapping paper, yeah.
Temi:Yeah, because you it's kind of not really worth the investment of
Temi:wallpaper because it's such a small space.
Temi:So just have like really super floral wallpaper and then stuck
Temi:lights all around the walls.
Temi:So it feels like a dressing room of a singer.
Temi:Yeah, and then I also have a bunch, like a lot of whiteboards on the walls.
Temi:So I'll write notes to myself.
Temi:I'll write how many hours I've done that day or different projects I'm
Temi:working on and things like that.
Temi:But it's quite a small space, but I like to think it's a bit like the
Temi:cockpit of a space station or something.
Temi:And I think the great thing about it is because it really can't be anything else.
Temi:It's just as soon as I sit down, I feel focused.
Temi:If there's something in the house that I'm like, oh, I should do this before I write.
Temi:I think if I close the door, it will be there in an hour, whatever
Temi:it is that I think I need to do.
Temi:And now that even though now I can work in coffee stores, I've just got into the
Temi:habit of I sit in the cupboard, I focus.
Temi:It's like a bit too uncomfortable to ever relax or procrastinate in..
Temi:There's only like a tiny corner where I can put like one coffee
Temi:mug, so it doesn't get messy.
Temi:So now I'm wondering, have I just now, I've just trained myself to be
Temi:this windowless cupboard creature.
Temi:Cause I find it hard to focus anywhere else now.
Temi:(laughs)
Tom:I think a lot of people will probably be quite envious of that because it
Tom:is almost like sensory depriv ation, just cutting off all distractions.
Tom:And I know some people like to write with soundtracks and thematic music
Tom:to get them in the head space where other people need absolute silence.
Tom:And so I think having a small space where you can deaden the outside world.
Tom:Especially if you're writing non contemporary fiction.
Tom:So your first book being scifi, anything speculative where you have
Tom:an element of world-building, you can just enter into that world.
Tom:And that's actually me casually leaning into my next question of with
Tom:your projects that you're working on now, did you start with a character
Tom:in mind, a scenario, or was there a world that you wanted to build?
Temi:Yeah, oh it's hard to answer that.
Temi:Talk about the things that I'm doing now.
Temi:So yeah, I was like in the like final editing phase of book two and then
Temi:during lockdown, I just started, I started working on a couple of other
Temi:projects, so I've made a short film, which will be finished in April.
Temi:I'm so excited about it.
Temi:It's from a short story that I wrote.
Temi:And from that I've been like doing some other TV work.
Temi:And I've been, so I've been like writing a lot of things in other people's worlds.
Temi:So that's where the world and the character does exist.
Temi:So you have to try and think of the way in.
Tom:Oh yeah.
Tom:Let's break that down a bit, because yeah, I had no idea.
Tom:Now it's just okay, we've got few things we can definitely talk about.
Tom:So after, Do You Dream of Terra Two comes out, at the time it's released your still
Tom:working on the second, your second book.
Tom:Did that second book's project start before the TV script work?
Tom:Or were they kind of in parallel?
Temi:Yeah, so I've been working on book two, basically since a little bit before
Temi:Terra Two came out onto the shelves.
Temi:It's just been, it takes me a very long time to write novels, which I
Temi:maybe I'm just going to accept and try and write other things faster.
Temi:Back to your other question about, do you start with characters, I actually
Temi:feel like with novels cause Terra Two I've written like one or two unpublished
Temi:novels before Terra Two as well, so yeah.
Temi:And this one as well.
Temi:So I I think I go into it asking some questions of myself and life.
Temi:So like with Terra Two, it was a lot about growing up and I was thinking about how,
Temi:cause the characters they turn 18 and then they leave everything behind and they
Temi:leave the whole of all of Earth behind.
Temi:I think I was thinking about how you lose things, sort of every stage of growing up.
Temi:And how do you balance the kind of grief that like, I'll never be a
Temi:child again, and I'll never like, have the same relationship as I did
Temi:when I was young with my parents.
Temi:Or I'll never live with my parents, maybe.
Temi:Although I'm a Millennial, maybe I will.
Temi:Like how do you balance, like the grief with I suppose like the
Temi:hopefulness, the things that you gain.
Temi:And then also, I guess for a long time when I was writing
Temi:it, I was quite depressed.
Temi:And like a lot of novel it was saying, I don't know, they're on
Temi:this journey and they suffer a lot on the journey and a lot of them
Temi:are asking, what's the point of it?
Temi:What's the point of continuing persevering on this journey when
Temi:we know we will keep suffering?
Temi:So I I think the reason it takes me a long time it's because I don't have the answer.
Temi:I, I write the book and I sort of like live life and then write a bit more and
Temi:think about it and have it in my head for a while until I feel like I'm far enough
Temi:away from the person who started the book that I can say something to that person.
Tom:Yeah.
Temi:By the time I get to the end of the book.
Temi:Yeah.
Tom:Now, I must admit when reading it I took breaks and sometimes my
Tom:wife was just like, are you okay?
Tom:It's it's a quite philosophical book.
Tom:I'm just having to just mull this over for a bit.
Tom:Or it's getting really dark.
Tom:I'm not sure everyone's going to be okay.
Tom:I need to just walk away.
Tom:But yeah, it's interesting to hear, you know, I had that as a reader of
Tom:just, gosh, what they're asking of themselves is really interesting.
Tom:I'm going to stop and actually go away.
Tom:And that's exactly what you had as a writer in that just,
Tom:that's quite interesting to me.
Tom:And so with your second book that you're editing at the moment, are
Tom:you posing, obviously not the same questions, but are you posing questions
Tom:about life to yourself that you're working through with the characters?
Tom:Or is it a different style?
Temi:Yeah, I would say it's a similar thing.
Temi:Yeah.
Temi:Yeah.
Temi:And also it's funny cause the books end up overlapping as well.
Temi:So like when I started this one like I just got married and a lot of what I
Temi:was thinking about was like identity.
Temi:Like how when you get married you become a joint person in a way.
Temi:I feel like whenever my husband leaves a little while, I have to remember
Temi:the person I was when he wasn't there.
Temi:Like what did I eat then?
Temi:(laughs)
Tom:Yeah, I got married in 2020.
Tom:So yeah, it was a pandemic wedding as well.
Tom:And we've only been in our house for a year.
Tom:And so there is that our mannerisms are merging and, you know, we were
Tom:just picking up habits off each other.
Tom:I was like, oh my goodness we're becoming the same person.
Temi:Yeah.
Temi:Or even things like his brother will tell me a story from their childhood and
Temi:I'll realize I've heard it so many times.
Temi:I almost remember it.
Temi:And I'm like, that's not how I remember it.
Temi:I'm thinking a lot about that yeah, but yeah, there's this technology that kind
Temi:of merges identity in a sort of way.
Temi:So yeah.
Tom:It's not in the same universe as the first book, it's a completely standalone?
Temi:Yeah.
Tom:But, what I found really interesting with your book, rather
Tom:than just setting it in a future from us, it was contemporary to us, but
Tom:in a different universe where Britain was involved in the space race.
Tom:And I just found that was an amazing take.
Tom:Is that a similar thing with your latest book, that is like an
Tom:alternate universe, but contemporary?
Temi:Yeah.
Temi:I think I had a lot of fun doing that with Terra Two.
Temi:I'm just taking the bits that I liked, but trying to keep it as familiar as possible.
Temi:So I'm thinking that maybe that might be a thing I keep doing, like
Temi:for as long as it fits the story.
Temi:Yeah.
Tom:I thought it was really interesting because often people say
Tom:with speculative fiction, it is very much a commentary on where we are now.
Tom:And if you set it somewhere in the future, you're always going to get things wrong.
Tom:But if you said it in an alternative world it's like, it's an alternative universe.
Tom:You know, the 2012 Olympics were still in London.
Tom:The 2008 recession still happened, but we're on Mars and the UK space
Tom:agency are sending people to another planet and it's just, it's 2020.
Tom:I just yeah, I think that's a great approach.
Tom:It's not something that, well, It's certainly not a common trope.
Tom:It's you know, I wouldn't even say it's a trope.
Tom:And so I, I liked that fresh take.
Tom:I, I'm sure there's people listening who are screaming other authors who
Tom:do it, and it's great that other authors do it, but it's not so common.
Tom:Cause it's certainly not something that you see in popular culture.
Tom:He says just as he remembers the Marvel metaverse, but we'll ignore that.
Tom:No one pays attention to that.
Temi:It's even funnier now though because it really is the past.
Temi:Like 2012 feels so long ago.
Temi:So yeah, I guess like the more people read it, like the older it'll, it might
Temi:start to have a retro Sci-fi feel.
Tom:I, yeah, I just, I think um, parallel universes, it's not being
Tom:the central theme to the book.
Tom:It just happens to be set in a parallel universe is really cool.
Tom:Is there anything like technology or something that was really different
Tom:that you wanted to add to the world that's not a plot spoiler that you want
Tom:to talk about with the second book?
Temi:No, it is a plot spoiler.
Temi:Yeah because it does centre around the technology.
Temi:So if I tell yeah, I can share, you can invite me back when it comes out.
Tom:Yeah.
Tom:Oh, absolutely.
Tom:In the abstract then how did your research go into technology?
Tom:Do you look into engineering articles and where we are technically now to
Tom:formulate that, or is it based more on just sci-fi fiction that you've read
Tom:and you wanted have a tweak on something that you've read in something else.
Tom:How do you go about developing it?
Temi:I actually find, if you try and invent some technology, you'll like,
Temi:you'll Google it and find scientists in Japan have done something that's more
Temi:advanced than what you've even thought of.
Temi:So I actually don't even try and make it futuristic.
Temi:It's not, I normally take something that some scientists has done and
Temi:then just extrapolate it to, okay, here's a world where it's really
Temi:easy to do and everyone does it.
Temi:Yeah, I don't, yeah, I did the same kind of with Terra Two with
Temi:the engine that the ship runs on, use things that already exist.
Tom:And with your world-building, are you someone who likes to
Tom:really plan out the world?
Tom:So you know how everything runs in that world and your story is just a part of it.
Tom:Or is it very much, your story takes precedence and then little bits of the
Tom:world are created just to serve the story.
Tom:Cause I know some people do have these expansive worlds that they've been
Tom:set their stories part of, but they really know like the politics and how
Tom:everything works within that world.
Temi:Yeah, I really admire those writers who do that.
Temi:That's just not the, yeah, that isn't the way that I go.
Temi:But then I think if I did a little bit more thinking ahead and planning out
Temi:the world, I might fall into fewer plot problems when it comes to redrafting.
Temi:But I only ever think about, as far as my characters are interacting
Temi:with the world, then I'll invent it.
Temi:But I don't think further than that.
Tom:And so I gathered from that as well that you don't plan
Tom:a full outline of the story.
Temi:I do outline.
Temi:I'm actually, yeah, I'm pretty serious when it comes to outlining.
Temi:But then I'll, I don't know, I th a lot of the problems I do fall into
Temi:are I'll go backwards and say, why did the police react this way to
Temi:this technology when they already know it exists, that kind of thing.
Temi:But yeah, I know I always have an outliner.
Temi:I, yeah, I outline pretty in detail.
Temi:And then with every draft I'll re-outline, yeah.
Temi:Yeah, one thing I really enjoy doing is I like reading like The Hero's Journey.
Temi:There's this one by Christopher Vogler and there are a couple of others.
Temi:Screenwriters are really like on it with the outlining, in
Temi:comparison to novel writing.
Temi:So every time I'm going to do another draft, I'll look at all the problems,
Temi:that say like my editor has flagged, and then I'll also just try and diagnose
Temi:weaknesses and then figure out where each of the beats hits I don't know,
Temi:the hero's journey or something.
Temi:And then rewrite it according to that.
Tom:I have read book and I think it's a very good book.
Tom:And I think anyone who um, certainly wants a cinematic style or feels that
Tom:their stories are quite cinematic or want to write films, it's worth checking out.
Temi:Yeah, that one.
Temi:And also this one that I read when I was doing my masters, cause I did
Temi:the master's in creative writing.
Temi:Seven Basic Plots, which I actually feel like was the one, if I can name
Temi:one book that like changed what I think about what I'm doing, I'd say that one.
Temi:Seven Basic Plots by Christopher Booker, where he basically says that every story
Temi:in the world is actually just seven different stories, which I think certain
Temi:people find like heretical thought.
Temi:But actually just really gave me a lot of peace as a writer.
Temi:It made me think that like what I'm trying to do isn't reinvent the wheel.
Temi:That's not why we tell stories and that's not why we enjoy them.
Temi:There are actually things that we like to hear again and again.
Temi:Like we like to hear about the hero coming back from the dead.
Temi:And so made me think that I'm just part of that tradition.
Temi:And I think it gave me a lot of peace and especially as a science fiction writer
Temi:where you spend a lot of time going, how can I make a different and new?
Temi:Actually no, that's not my job.
Temi:I'm just part of it.
Tom:I think a lot of writing, especially speculative fiction is
Tom:it's commenting either on an aspect of society or on the human condition.
Tom:And I think that with Do You Dream Of Terra Two, it's very
Tom:much the human condition.
Tom:And like you were saying is like coming of age story, these 18 year olds.
Tom:What I found fascinating with it was you have a variety of different
Tom:backgrounds of these children, but they found very identifiable as I've
Tom:met those kinds of people or even, gosh, I used to feel like that.
Tom:And I know that a certain element of it will be these are all like
Tom:bits of my own childhood that I've filtered into different characters,
Tom:but did you actually do any kind of personality studies in that?
Tom:Because I felt that they were so identifiable.
Tom:And their backgrounds really informed those characters.
Tom:And I was like, is that just your natural skill as an empathetic
Tom:person to identify people like that?
Tom:Or did you actually do any research into personality types?
Temi:Um, no I wouldn't say it that I did.
Temi:I think I did begin by thinking, I want to make them as different
Temi:from each other as possible.
Temi:So that I can have like maximum conflict.
Temi:So then I'd think, okay, so I have this character, he believes
Temi:that the mission is this.
Temi:Why would they believe that?
Temi:And so I kind of work backwards and think, okay, maybe they come from this kind of
Temi:a background and they have this kind of history or this kind of trauma, and that
Temi:gives them this sort of motivating belief.
Temi:And then I'd sometimes I do an edit where I just do the chapters
Temi:that have a certain character.
Temi:And then all the way through, I'd imagine this character as the main character,
Temi:because that's how everyone feels.
Tom:That was one of the things that really blew me away was how there were
Tom:these fully fledged character arcs for seemingly everyone on the crew.
Tom:And it was just you don't get to see that.
Tom:You're generally you're following through one person sets of eyes.
Tom:But everyone, they had all changed by the end and there's definitely
Tom:learnings about themselves.
Tom:And that was just really impressive to me.
Tom:So is that with the second book, is there more than one point of view?
Temi:Yeah.
Temi:I mean, I don't know how much I can say!
Tom:I'm trying to ask in the abstract
Temi:There are two points of view in my second book.
Tom:Okay, so that's less.
Tom:That's less than the first book.
Temi:Fewer.
Temi:Yeah, yeah.
Temi:I think I probably that's that's another thing I do enjoy about fiction.
Temi:I really like it when I feel like I'm in one person's head and from their
Temi:head, I can see how they're totally justified and really they're the hero.
Temi:And I'm in another person's point of view and I'm like, no, actually
Temi:they're actually villainous.
Temi:And maybe mean, yeah.
Tom:But why they are like that.
Tom:And why in their own heads they don't see themselves as a villain.
Tom:Cause the best written villains are the hero in their own story.
Tom:They've just gone down a different path.
Tom:And I think you achieved that.
Tom:That was really good.
Tom:So I'm really looking forward to your second book.
Temi:That's an experience you can get in fiction that you don't get in real life,
Temi:just being in lots of people's heads.
Tom:Yeah.
Tom:To get you that not stressing about book spoilers, I'm going to get you
Tom:to stress about a script spoilers.
Tom:How was the transition from writing long form prose fiction to scripts?
Tom:Because it's a very different discipline.
Temi:Yeah, I feel like maybe I will get in trouble for this, but I also aware
Temi:I've had enough experience, but I have found novel writing definitely harder.
Temi:I think it's because in a novel, everything relies on you.
Temi:You do the lighting and the costumes and you have to explain everything
Temi:about the characters in a life.
Temi:Whereas with a script, it relies on the talent of so many other people.
Temi:You're just writing a recipe, is my feeling.
Temi:There are like skills that are translatable.
Temi:You definitely need to have an understanding of
Temi:pacing and character arcs.
Temi:And then there are things that you can't rely on in a script, like in a story,
Temi:I could have someone walking down the road and a thought occurs to them.
Temi:Whereas, you can't really rely on that.
Tom:Show don't tell.
Tom:Yeah.
Tom:So with these, cause you've done a short film, which is
Tom:based on your own short story.
Tom:So you adapted your own short story.
Tom:Did you find with that adaptation it was just like, oh yeah, there's a lot
Tom:of introspective thought process that I need to change or was it when you
Tom:wrote the short story, the reason that you adapted that particular short story
Tom:was because it was far more external?
Temi:Yeah, I think as a writer, I don't actually write a lot of dialogue.
Temi:I feel like now I can recognize like script writers who write novels.
Temi:There's is one that I really just recently read that I really enjoyed
Temi:called Lights Out in Lincolnwood.
Temi:And the dialogue is so snappy and good.
Temi:And then I was reading about the author and he also writes scripts.
Temi:Whereas I don't think my dialogue, I dunno.
Temi:I think a lot of my characters sound like each other and they all sound like me.
Temi:So yeah, that's definitely something I've had to learn about while writing a script.
Temi:Yeah.
Tom:So I know some writers they'll think of certain actors
Tom:performing certain roles.
Tom:And so you have that individual's mannerisms.
Temi:Oh that's actually a good idea.
Tom:Yeah.
Temi:I might take that.
Tom:Yeah.
Tom:I don't know who it is, so I'll claim it.
Tom:Yeah but I'm pretty sure it's a, it's done by a lot of people.
Tom:But yeah, if you just think, okay, who would play this person?
Tom:If this was going to be a movie, who would I want to play this?
Tom:Okay.
Tom:See them in interviews.
Tom:And because sometimes you get that with certain screenplays where they go, oh,
Tom:I wrote it I had this actor in mind.
Tom:And I think there probably some times where they go, I had this
Tom:actor in mind, they said no.
Tom:So we had to find someone else.
Tom:But yeah, when you said earlier about, you know, writing a recipe,
Tom:there's multiple people involved.
Tom:Is it a much more collaborative process going through the scripts and are
Tom:you collaborating with the director, a producer and who's giving you the
Tom:feedback on the drafts of the scripts?
Temi:Yeah, definitely.
Temi:That's actually like the difference that I was not prepared for, because like with a
Temi:novel it's just one or two people really.
Temi:It's like you and your editor.
Tom:And then lots of times the editor is yeah, they're trying
Tom:to just distilling your voice.
Tom:So it's just oh, grammatically, you might want to change this.
Tom:Or you've said "then" a thousand times in this chapter, but it's still your
Tom:voice and a good editor should be just making you the best version of you.
Tom:Scripts are not like that.
Temi:Yeah.
Temi:And also there are lots of different considerations.
Temi:Like I wrote a scene set in a school and the director was like,
Temi:it's COVID we can't do a school.
Temi:No.
Temi:Or I'd have, I dunno, a crowd scene.
Temi:They'd be like it's just too expensive.
Temi:No.
Temi:And it's just I guess there are lots of considerations that aren't story reasons.
Temi:Like with a novel, because you have like unlimited budget, you can set it in
Temi:space, you can set it in your bedroom, but yeah, it's not like that with a script.
Temi:So I think like learning to incorporate things that are not about
Temi:it being a story, it's technical.
Temi:It's interesting.
Temi:And also just doing lots of drafts.
Temi:I do lots of drafts on my own.
Temi:I think that's that is my process.
Temi:Before anyone sees anything, I'd probably rewritten it four or five times.
Temi:But, yeah, but I don't know in script world, it's just expected
Temi:to do so many drafts yeah.
Tom:And is that an ongoing, so is that one particular writing
Tom:project and we don't need to name it, but are you working with
Temi:I think I can talk about that one.
Temi:That one's not a secret.
Temi:Yeah, it's a short film called Murmur, which is directed by Simon Smith
Temi:who was a, an editor on Chernobyl.
Temi:Yeah.
Temi:I'm very proud of it.
Temi:It's beautiful.
Temi:I can't wait till it comes out.
Tom:And it comes out in April?
Temi:No, It will be finished in April.
Temi:So sometime, sometime this year, though.
Tom:Okay.
Tom:And with other script-based projects that you're working on, are you
Tom:working on a longer project?
Tom:Or is it a creative team you're doing one script for, another creative
Tom:team you're doing another script for?
Temi:Yeah.
Temi:Yeah, so now I'm also doing an episode of a TV program.
Temi:So I'm on the, in the writers room for that.
Temi:And that's very fun to do.
Temi:I just really enjoying sort of like learning all of these
Temi:different ways of writing.
Tom:Yeah.
Tom:So with a writer's room.
Tom:So again, being as vague as possible.
Tom:Is this a new project or like in general, like you're part of the initial
Tom:writer's room or is this an ongoing show that you're being brought into and
Tom:there's a preestablished writer's room?
Temi:You're asking such specific questions!
Temi:It's a spinoff of a TV show that already exists.
Tom:Okay.
Tom:That's fine.
Tom:That's cool.
Tom:Like we're not putting any names.
Tom:We're not saying anyone else in the creative teams.
Tom:So people can't like do like a Guess Who whittling it down on IMDB.
Tom:It's okay.
Tom:So these are characters that are known to you.
Temi:Yeah.
Tom:Okay.
Tom:And then you get to put your own fresh take on it and it's
Tom:in a different environment.
Tom:If it's a spinoff, it'll be in a different environment.
Tom:That's quite exciting.
Tom:That's quite cool.
Temi:Yeah.
Temi:I am really enjoying that.
Temi:Yeah.
Temi:It's interesting.
Temi:Like it's fun not doing the sort of initial groundwork, like building
Temi:the character up from nothing.
Temi:But then still trying to, I don't know, I guess find a way into the story
Temi:that makes it feel like me still.
Temi:If that makes sense?
Tom:Yeah, absolutely.
Tom:Yeah.
Tom:So it was like bringing your life experiences to characters in the show.
Tom:How is it being in a room with other writers?
Tom:Is it competitive, sort of vying for space?
Tom:Is everyone really supportive of oh, let's develop that idea more or are they
Tom:like, oh no, I've got a better idea?
Temi:I mean, I've, I've heard that maybe there are some like competitive
Temi:writer's rooms, but I dunno, I, this one feels pretty collaborative.
Temi:Yeah, I'm finding it really fun.
Temi:I actually really wish that there was something like a
Temi:writer's room for my own novel.
Temi:Because like the showrunner will say, oh, he has a problem and then we can
Temi:just like work through solutions.
Temi:Cause you have five minds working on it and we'll get to solutions really quickly.
Temi:Whereas if I have a problem, I'll just sit there or go for a walk and
Temi:bite my nails and think I'm a terrible writer until a solution comes to me.
Temi:Is it quite time-intensive though?
Temi:I guess if it's a show that's on preestablished characters,
Temi:they probably got a mindset of when they want it released.
Temi:So are you working to quite tight deadlines on that?
Temi:And how's that from you've just got as long as you want to work on your own
Temi:work to we need something by Friday.
Temi:How has that change of gear been?
Temi:Yeah, I would say the deadlines are quite tight.
Temi:But I think because I don't know, there's just so much outlining and that we worked
Temi:out so many of the story beats together.
Temi:I feel like I write a lot faster than I do when I'm just writing on my own.
Temi:Yeah.
Temi:It's actually made me think if I could somehow use this efficiency
Temi:and put it in my writing.
Temi:It's made me think like maybe I'm not outlining enough.
Temi:Yeah.
Temi:I find the writing process a lot smoother so far.
Tom:And, this shouldn't be a spoiler, but I feel this will be a question that panics
Tom:you, when did you join the writers' room?
Tom:So how long have you been working in the writers room?
Tom:Was it before Christmas?
Temi:Yeah, before Christmas.
Tom:Sometime in 2021, okay.
Tom:I is that quite a lot of your time, because you're now a full-time
Tom:writer and congratulations for that.
Tom:Um, And is this a lot of your work I'm guessing the majority
Tom:of your time is writer room stuff compared to novel writing?
Tom:Or is it?
Temi:No, I would say novel writing still takes up a lot.
Temi:Takes on most of my time and most of my brain space.
Temi:Yeah.
Tom:Well, I think that's probably a good thing that you still get that time
Tom:to work on your own personal projects.
Tom:So that's nice to hear.
Tom:Cause sometimes, I hear people who take on a creative writing job to
Tom:pay the bills and things like that.
Tom:And then it takes all that creative energy and so that their own work could suffer or
Tom:they worry that their work could suffer.
Tom:So, that's not the case is lovely to hear.
Tom:But now that you've had this for a few months now, writers room aspect, have
Tom:you noticed a real change in the way that you're approaching your novel?
Tom:Cause you said you wish you had a writer's room you wish you had that efficiency.
Tom:Are you, have you had like a redraft where you've just a draft pre-writers'
Tom:room, draft post access to writer's room.
Tom:Was there a noticeable shift in how you approach the work.
Tom:Is there something conscious in that, that you started adding to your own work?
Temi:Um, So I've also and this is in the world, I wrote a short story
Temi:for a Black Panther Marvel anthology.
Temi:So that's another thing in another world.
Temi:I think it's, so it's just, it hasn't really changed practically
Temi:how my writing turns out, but it's changed my perspective on it.
Temi:I think before, when I was only working on my novel yeah, I get
Temi:hung up a lot with problems.
Temi:But now I feel just grateful for it.
Temi:Because it, it's just my world, they're just my character.
Temi:I'm doing it for me when it goes out in the world it will only have my name on it.
Temi:Yeah, I think it, it feels extra special to me now.
Temi:Yeah.
Tom:Is it the same editor that you heard on your first book?
Temi:No, it's a different editor, but still with Simon and Schuster.
Tom:Okay.
Tom:And have they challenged you in a different way or do they have a similar
Tom:approach and it was just availability on the editor or are they quite different?
Temi:Yeah, I find it all editors seem to be pretty different.
Temi:Yeah, because it's a mixture of, like their style and if you have the same
Temi:or like a similar vision for the book.
Temi:Yeah, but I've enjoyed working with both editors.
Temi:I'm very grateful for them.
Tom:And before working with Simon Schuster, have you had a
Tom:lot of experience with editors?
Tom:Are these really the only two editors that you've worked with?
Temi:I did do a master's in creative writing.
Temi:And the place that I did, maybe all places do this, where you have like workshops.
Temi:Where everyone there may be 20 people, they'll all read your
Temi:work and then give you edits.
Temi:So it's like having 20 different editors.
Temi:Plus, we'd have a different teacher every other week, like a different
Temi:professor, and they'd give you edits.
Temi:And then I'd write my dissertation, which is like chapters of a novel.
Temi:And then you'd get feedback on that.
Temi:So I feel like I had lots of experience with just getting feedback,
Temi:yeah, before I did Terra Two.
Temi:And then also my agent and another her assistant in the agency as well also give
Temi:me edits before we even got to an editor.
Temi:So I think like 20 or 30 different people had given me
Temi:edits before I go into an editor.
Tom:So how'd you find the editing process?
Tom:Is it that you crave the critical feedback and go, yes, I'm stuck.
Tom:I need someone in that.
Tom:Or is it how dare you?
Tom:I need to just go away, lick my wounds for a period of time before
Tom:going, you might have a point.
Tom:Cause I know some people hate the editing experience, but
Tom:appreciate the value of an editor.
Tom:And some people just go, I feel this is a pile of trash, please tell me it's not.
Tom:Or tell me how to get it better.
Temi:I am that person.
Temi:I feel like, I dunno, like my normal unedited, it's like the
Temi:equivalent of walking into party with like toilet paper on my shoe.
Temi:And like an editor will really kindly get rid of it for me.
Temi:And do you have beta readers?
Temi:Do you have people that just act as a reader without going
Temi:into the detail an editor would?
Temi:Yeah.
Temi:I have my friends and my husband.
Temi:I mean, I'm grateful for their time, but I always do wonder how
Temi:useful it is since they know you.
Temi:And they also know all the work that went into it.
Temi:With this novel, it sort sorta felt like I told them and told
Temi:them about this house I'm building.
Temi:And I spent three years going oh, I'm really worried about this house.
Temi:And like now they're visiting it.
Temi:And all I want to hear is it was worth everything.
Temi:It was worth the time.
Tom:Yeah.
Tom:Yeah.
Tom:That's fair, yeah, it's definitely a use.
Tom:It's definitely good to have those people.
Tom:I think it's my old sort of faithful that we always seem to go through,
Tom:and I think this definitely going to apply to you, imposter syndrome
Tom:and how you deal with that.
Tom:Cause I think if you're someone who feels that they're turning up to a party
Tom:with toilet paper on their shoe, you're someone who's had imposter syndrome?
Tom:I feel that's correct to say?
Temi:Yeah, I think, especially before book one was published.
Temi:So it was like, I think I signed with Simon & Schuster and it was about two
Temi:years till it was on the shelf, but yeah.
Temi:Which is like the longest time I've heard from other people.
Temi:So there was kind of, they started publicity like a year in, so there's like
Temi:a solid year where I'd go to interviews and panels and then people would say, and
Temi:everyone's book is in the shops except for Temi's, which you can get next year.
Temi:And also people would ask, they can only really ask vague questions.
Temi:Cause obviously no one had read it.
Temi:Yeah, I definitely, especially sitting next to authors who
Temi:were on like the five or six.
Temi:I think then I did feel a lot of imposter syndrome.
Temi:Yeah, I guess now, now in my house.
Temi:I dunno.
Temi:I don't have to feel imposter syndrom on Zoom (laughs)
Temi:Um, yeah.
Temi:Um, so I, I think I, I get it less, but I also have done, I've done fewer
Temi:events, so I can't really judge.
Temi:Yeah.
Tom:So is that what really triggers the imposter syndrome when
Tom:you're around other writers that you deem your peers and you feel?
Temi:I think sitting on a panel with other authors, especially
Temi:authors I admire, I always think by what trick of fate am I here?
Temi:Yeah.
Temi:I had this maybe it was two years ago now, Margaret Atwood's
Temi:book, The Testaments came out.
Temi:I was on a panel with Neil Gaiman, Jeanette Winterson, Elif Shafak and A.
Temi:M.
Temi:Homes (Shocked laughter)
Temi:I was like, I don't know.
Temi:I was pretty overwhelmed.
Temi:I was so overwhelmed seeing Neil Gaiman.
Temi:And obviously also like all the other authors, I'm such a big fan of.
Temi:And like, like leading up to it, I just spend ages saying, why did they choose me?
Temi:How did they choose?
Temi:And I remember sitting next to Neil Gaiman um, we're doing our signing.
Temi:And obviously he had a line going.
Tom:Oh his queue, yeah.
Temi:And he's also just so sweet and would talk to everyone and doodle little
Temi:pictures in their books and stuff.
Temi:And I am like newbie writer.
Temi:So had no one in my line, just pretending I was fine.
Temi:Just reading through Neverwhere again.
Temi:Every now and then someone would look at me, pityingly me
Temi:and say I'm not here for you.
Temi:I'm hoping he'll sign my book.
Temi:I don't know.
Temi:Do you want to say my, do you want to sign his book as well?
Temi:I'm not going to buy your book, but maybe you can write something in this book.
Tom:I ask people how they cope with imposter syndrome, it sounds
Tom:like you just avoid going out.
Tom:Just sit under the cupboard under the stairs and just forget about the world.
Tom:But is there a way that you have, now that you were coming to your second book,
Tom:now you've worked in writers' rooms.
Tom:Do you feel in a better place, as you say, you've got a house now, that you feel more
Tom:justified in your position as a writer?
Tom:Do you feel better able to combat imposter syndrome or is it an ongoing battle?
Temi:I dunno.
Temi:The thing I always tell myself is someone chose for me to be here.
Temi:So if you have questions, direct them at that person.
Tom:It wasn't a typo, they're they're not expecting an author called Remi Oh.
Temi:So that's what I always would, I always told myself.
Temi:I was telling myself when I was sitting next to Neil Gaiman, I was
Temi:like, someone chose this, so I'm glad.
Temi:And I think I get it less when people have read my book.
Temi:Because I feel like we're talking about something.
Temi:Yeah, but yeah, I don't know.
Temi:Yeah.
Temi:I guess everyone gets it.
Tom:And I, yeah, I think if it was Neil Gaiman, I remember reading
Tom:and I thought it might be one of his very lengthy introductions that
Tom:he does on his short story books.
Tom:But it was about, he was at a big event and he was stood at the
Tom:back with another man called Neil.
Tom:And they were just like why are we here?
Tom:I don't know.
Tom:It was just like, I just make stuff up for a living.
Tom:And he goes, yeah, I just did my mission.
Tom:I just, I just did what they told me and it was just like, so if Neil
Tom:Armstrong could have imposter syndrome, then I can have imposter syndrome.
Tom:And it's just, yeah, I think everyone can have, that's why they're being there.
Tom:Like you say you, you were picked.
Tom:And it's just remembering that.
Temi:This is what I was saying to one of my friends as well, who gets it in
Temi:her job where it's like, they hired you, so that's why you get to be there.
Temi:It's not about you and how you feel.
Temi:Yeah.
Tom:And another thing I want to talk to you about was I read an interview that
Tom:you feel very monogamous about your ideas.
Tom:That when writing a book, you're very much you're focused on that book because
Tom:sometimes you get writers who have a thousand and one ideas at any one time.
Tom:Now that you're working on various projects, how's that balance?
Tom:And now that you also, that you're coming to the end of a book that
Tom:you're editing, is it quite easy to sort of, okay, I'm in this room, I
Tom:can forget about the other things.
Tom:Or can you be in the writers room and go oh, I think I might use that?
Temi:No, no, no.
Temi:I find it hard.
Temi:I feel like this is my problem.
Temi:It's, I can only really focus and I need like a period of
Temi:time to focus on something.
Temi:So I can't even say, oh, in the morning oh I'll write this and
Temi:then the evening I'll do this.
Temi:I'll just have, I'll just say, when I get to the end of this script, then
Temi:I have to forget about everything else I'm writing while I write it.
Temi:And then I can go back to whatever else it was that I was writing.
Temi:Yeah.
Temi:I'm still like that.
Temi:I feel like I have like an antenna out for inspiration, but I can't
Temi:do that for like multiple projects.
Temi:I can only do it for one thing, so yeah.
Tom:Oh, that's interesting.
Tom:If you just go for a walk and you think, oh you know, an
Tom:idea might drop in your head.
Tom:It's almost like, an idea has to drop in your head, but I can
Tom:only attribute them to this one.
Temi:I feel it won't come for another thing.
Temi:I feel like I, I will say to the world, give me ideas please for the story.
Temi:And those are the only ones that come to me.
Tom:Okay.
Tom:So this is a walk for this project and then I'll go on another
Tom:walk for that other project.
Tom:Your dog gets about eight walks a day just working on various different projects.
Tom:And yeah, I was wondering you know, with you editing the second
Tom:book, if it's in its final stages.
Tom:Uh, have you got anything for after that, or is it just no, get this
Tom:done and then I'll start speculating?
Temi:Yeah.
Temi:And in between edits in like gaps between edits, ideas definitely come to me.
Temi:And oh, this is a fun process thing that I do enjoy doing.
Temi:So I like playing Sims 4 and I get like ideas for characters
Temi:and then I'll try and build them.
Temi:And I also like to build the homes of characters.
Temi:I guess it's my way of I'm technically procrastinating, but
Temi:I like to say I'm also working.
Temi:So I've had some ideas for characters for a book three.
Temi:I'm so excited to start working on it when I can.
Tom:That's good.
Tom:Is it just that it's currently in Sims 4 will be on the page soon.
Tom:So I'm going to go on to my final two questions.
Tom:And it's my belief that writers continue to grow and develop their
Tom:writing with each story they write.
Tom:Is there anything that you've learned from book one that you're now applying to
Tom:book two or something from the writers' room that you're very conscious that
Tom:you're applying to your second novel?
Temi:Yeah, I would definitely say with the writer's room, I really feel
Temi:like just the importance of outlining.
Temi:Like I thought I took it really seriously, but we map out every single beat and
Temi:I've just seen how much easier is.
Temi:Work out all the plot kinks before you've written 50,000 words,
Temi:and then you encounter them.
Temi:So that's definitely something that I'm thinking I'm going
Temi:to try and remember to do.
Temi:I think working on a script has probably made my dialogue better.
Temi:I always thought that I'm not a very funny person.
Temi:I think just because, especially with Terra Two, it's so sincere.
Temi:And my characters they don't really make that many jokes.
Temi:They just say what they think.
Temi:But I don't know, I feel like I've been quite funny in the script cause I think
Temi:like the IP is sort of light, so I, I dunno, I think I'm going to try and
Temi:take that confidence into my writing.
Temi:My characters can sometimes joke with each other.
Tom:From what I've gleaned from what you said about the book
Tom:two, where there's two people.
Tom:I think if it's a couple, either friends or romantically, and you're recently
Tom:married, then you've got those little intimacy jokes where it's not like a
Tom:standard person walks into a bar sort of joke, but it's just little quirks of
Tom:the human condition, the little tropes that people have that are quite funny.
Tom:And I think that's a very common thing of intimacy when you have two people
Tom:like really living close together.
Tom:And I think there's a lot of just natural humor and comedy
Tom:that can come out of that.
Tom:And I think if, yeah, there's a blending of people or personalities in your book
Tom:then I can see a lot of comedy in that.
Tom:Just like naturally coming up.
Tom:As well as trauma and conflict, but yeah, well, I look forward to it.
Tom:I really look forward to uh, funny Temi.
Tom:Obviously you've mentioned Christopher Vogler earlier, but is there one piece
Tom:of advice you find yourself returning to and applying to your own writing?
Temi:Oh now you've said the thing about Christopher Vogler.
Temi:It reminds me of the end of The Writer's Journey, he talks
Temi:about talks about shaman.
Temi:This might seem really grandiose, but this is what motivates me.
Temi:He talks about how the shaman has to go back from the dead and then
Temi:he comes back with something.
Temi:And it like helps his community.
Temi:And that, I don't know, I felt like it really motivated me
Temi:about what I do as a writer.
Temi:I think because you end up going into dark places, or you end up facing self
Temi:doubt or just like battling your ego.
Temi:And reading that kind of just told, I guess it just reminded me
Temi:why I think that it's worth it.
Temi:Because the world is richer for all of the art that people make.
Temi:And it's not going to be an easy journey.
Temi:But that's part of it and that's why it's valuable, whatever it is you bring back.
Temi:Yeah.
Tom:I think that's a beautiful thing to end on and I just like to thank you,
Tom:Tammy, for being my guest this week.
Tom:It's been great.
Temi:Thank you.
Tom:Thank you.
Tom:And that was the real writing process of Temi Oh.
Tom:Isn't she great.
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Tom:It's one of my favorite science fiction books this year.
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