The Real Writing Process of RJ Barker
Tom Pepperdine interviews RJ Barker about his writing process. RJ discusses the benefit of a brilliant editor, the joy of Vimto, and why research can be over-rated.
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Transcript
Hello, and welcome to The Real Writing Process.
Tom:I'm your host, Tom Pepperdine.
Tom:And this episode, my guest is the writer, RJ Barker.
Tom:For those that don't know RJ, he's the award-winning author of The Bone Ships.
Tom:The first book in the Tide Child trilogy.
Tom:That has taken me so many takes to say the Tide Child trilogy.
Tom:It just doesn't roll off the tongue for me.
Tom:Uh, I call it The Bone Ships Trilogy.
Tom:The books are called The Bone Ships, Call of the Bone Ships and the Bone Ships Wake.
Tom:It's The Bone Ships trilogy.
Tom:Yes, Tide Child does make sense when you read the books, but
Tom:it's just, it's hard to say.
Tom:And it, you know, it hard to find in a bookshop when you're just
Tom:looking for The Bone Ships Trilogy.
Tom:But I know RJ now.
Tom:I've spoken to him.
Tom:I think he just likes to fuck with people.
Tom:And, certainly with his debut trilogy, the wounded kingdom trilogy.
Tom:They're Assassin books.
Tom:It's the Age of Assassins, Blood of Assassins, King of Assassins.
Tom:It's the Assassins trilogy.
Tom:But yeah, he writes fantasy.
Tom:They're full of dragons, assassins, and bird wizards.
Tom:He doesn't always write fantasy.
Tom:He, some people actually know him as the crime writer RJ Dark.
Tom:He's written a book called A Numbers Game.
Tom:So we have a bit of a chat about pseudonyms.
Tom:Um, he's an odd guy.
Tom:I don't think that's a criticism.
Tom:I think that's he'd be quite proud of that.
Tom:It's a great chat.
Tom:He's possibly one of the funniest people I've interviewed.
Tom:And I think you'll really like this episode.
Tom:Uh, I know some people will definitely like this episode because
Tom:RJ was actually requested to be a guest by my Twitter followers.
Tom:So thank you followers on Twitter.
Tom:If you'd like to follow me on Twitter, it's @therealwriting1.
Tom:Just because the real writing process is too long for Uh, Twitter, unfortunately.
Tom:So, yeah, so he was requested.
Tom:I got him on.
Tom:We had a lovely chat.
Tom:And this is the very first interview I did for season two.
Tom:This was right back at the beginning of January, 2022.
Tom:In fact season one was still going out and I make reference to that in
Tom:this interview, it's very strange.
Tom:Uh, a lot has happened since then.
Tom:Anyway, uh, that's the intro.
Tom:I'll play jingle.
Tom:You'll listen to the interview and there'll be a bit of chat at the end.
Tom:Okay.
Tom:Talk to you later.
Tom:Hello and today my guest, I'm very pleased to say, is
Tom:the author, RJ Barker, RJ.
Tom:Hello.
RJ:Hello.
RJ:Pleased to be here.
Tom:Great.
Tom:And my first question as always, what are we drinking?
RJ:Well, I'm actually, I'm betraying my Northern heritage because we're
RJ:drinking a Mancunian drink, which is, people expect me to say Boddingtons.
RJ:I bet everyone else turns up with beers, but Vimto, which I'm obsessed with.
RJ:I've got a SodaStream.
Tom:Fizzy Vimto.
Tom:That takes me back.
RJ:Yeah well, I'm fancy.
RJ:I don't drink.
Tom:Okay.
Tom:And so with Vimto, how long have you been a Vimto drinker?
RJ:I've been a Vimto drinker all my life.
RJ:On and off.
RJ:And then it was a friend in Manchester, it was freezing cold and
RJ:they said, you want some hot Vimto?
RJ:And I was like what's this madness, you talk?
RJ:Hot Vimto?
RJ:No, summer drink, ice in it.
RJ:That's Vimto.
RJ:And then he went, no, no you're wrong.
RJ:And they made me hot Vimto, and it's just astounding.
RJ:If you've got a bit of a cold or something it's is absolutely just amazing.
RJ:It's the perfect drink.
RJ:It used to be hot Ribena, now hot Vimto if I'm feeling a bit ill.
Tom:There's definitely.
Tom:Yeah, there's definitely a difference.
Tom:You can't substitute.
Tom:Absolutely.
Tom:I used to date a Mancunian and again, it was that cold sort of thing.
Tom:As a southerner myself, it was always Lucozade.
Tom:When you get cold and have Lucozade.
Tom:Manchester is hot Vimto.
Tom:I was like, hello.
Tom:It has all the nice bits of cough medicine without any of the horrible bits.
RJ:Yeah, that's a really good way of describing it.
Tom:So that's what's always appealed to me.
RJ:And it looks like it looks at wine as well.
RJ:Cause I don't drink for any sort of exciting great story.
RJ:It'd be good if I had a really good story about having problems or being
RJ:a tortured artist, but I don't.
RJ:I, I got really ill and I stopped drinking because I was ill and I realized
RJ:that I was drinking for confidence.
RJ:I don't actually need it, I'm quite confident.
RJ:And then I realized that I don't like hangovers.
RJ:And when you don't drink, suddenly you don't think about
RJ:what did I say last night?
RJ:And that's all kind of gone.
RJ:So now if I say something really stupid or awful, it's entirely my
RJ:own fault, can't blame anything.
RJ:And I've just never got back into the habit, but I do kind
RJ:of miss having a glass of wine.
RJ:I like it.
Tom:Yeah, I think there's definitely cultural aspects to what you said, the
Tom:tortured artist and the alcoholic writer.
Tom:But I think Vimto is a fine substitute.
Tom:Is this, would you drink Vimto through a writing session or is it more
Tom:of a reward once you've finished?
RJ:No, no, no.
RJ:I'd have a glass of Vimto, I might go crazy, I might have a Coca Cola
RJ:if I'm feeling particularly spicy.
RJ:Yeah.
RJ:But I'm trying to cut down on the amount of sugar cause I've got
RJ:Crohn's disease, which means I can't eat basically anything healthy.
RJ:I've got a doctor's note that says I have to live off sweets and like me cause
RJ:my body can't process stuff properly.
RJ:But I think at some point they're just going to turn up and go look
RJ:RJ you've got diabetes, but I can't abide sugar-free drinks.
Tom:Yeah, it's so noticeable now.
Tom:I think with the sugar tax and they've bought in all the
Tom:sugar-free things that when you do get sugar it's oh, here's a kick.
RJ:And some people, I don't think, I think they can't taste
RJ:the, the sweeteners, but I can.
RJ:My other half, she can't tell the difference.
RJ:She has to go which of these is diet.
RJ:You know when you get drinks and you don't know which is diet.
Tom:Wow.
RJ:So I taste cause she cannot tell the difference, but I was just
RJ:like, oh yeah, I know what that is.
Tom:For me, it's almost like a texture.
Tom:I think that a good sugary drink, it feels slightly thicker in my mouth
Tom:because it says more substance to it.
RJ:Yeah, it's just better.
RJ:We're children of the nineties.
RJ:We know sugar is good for us.
RJ:Yes, despite, despite science.
RJ:(laughs)
Tom:Exactly.
Tom:Yeah.
Tom:We're still alive.
Tom:So it must be fine.
Tom:(laughs) And so you're in Leeds at the moment.
Tom:And can you describe where you are uh, to our listeners?
Tom:So the room you're in at the moment where are you?
RJ:Oh, see, I'm not in the good room.
RJ:Cause I've been kicked out by my family because they're, it's Christmas.
RJ:It's not it's after Christmas.
RJ:It's the first, second day of 2002?
RJ:22!
Tom:It's the third.
RJ:I'm in our bedroom, which is a room in a 17th century mansion that was once owned
RJ:by the family of Scott of the Antarctic.
RJ:That's my claim to fame.
RJ:It was their coach house.
RJ:And it's usually my wife's office, so there's all her stuff.
RJ:And she's she's also very creative.
RJ:She's arty.
RJ:She's a designer.
RJ:And her creative process is a lot more messier than mine.
RJ:So it's not my, I couldn't work in this area, but it works for her, but I've been
RJ:kicked out of where I would work, which is our front room, which is massive and
RJ:it's covered in dead animals everywhere.
RJ:Very old ones we don't have them killed especially for us.
Tom:Recycled death.
RJ:Yeah.
RJ:Yeah.
RJ:We, we kind of, we ended up with a lot of taxidermy that has been in
RJ:museums, which they don't have a place for, cause it's a bit rubbish
RJ:now and it's gone a bit mankey.
RJ:And there's a writer called John Courtney Grimwood, who's absolutely brilliant.
RJ:And he'd put on his Facebook that he had a leopard skin rug that
RJ:was like a family heirloom and he said, but it's got holes in it.
RJ:It's not very nice, but I don't want to throw it out.
RJ:Cause he, he was raised with it.
RJ:And there were let's say a hundred people underneath
RJ:saying you should give it to RJ.
RJ:He'll take it.
RJ:And he did and it lives on the back of our sofa now.
RJ:And he's he's got a pirate hat and a patch.
RJ:No, he's got a turban and a patch now.
Tom:Amazing.
RJ:It was a pirate hat.
Tom:So it's a bit of an order and chaos.
Tom:Ying and Yang with your wife and yourself?
RJ:I think my chaos is in my head.
RJ:She's actually if you say, what have you got to do tomorrow?
RJ:She can reel off all the work and she knows when it's due and when
RJ:it's all coming and she diaries and stuff, but she has a lot of stuff.
Tom:Yeah.
RJ:If you say what you've got, when's your deadline?
RJ:I'm like, oh, I dunno.
RJ:I'm writing a book.
RJ:And my chaos is in my head but I don't like stuff.
RJ:So it's all just, I do have a notebook that I have here.
RJ:But I just doodle on it.
RJ:I don't actually write anything useful.
RJ:Or I write notes, the stuff that I'm going to do and then forget them.
RJ:And that stuff seems to be part of my process.
Tom:Because it's ringbound, for our listeners, it's a ring bound notebook.
RJ:Yeah.
Tom:Is it useful to have tearable pages that you can just rip out?
RJ:No, no, I I always start things away and I don't keep stuff, but
RJ:this is a bit of a cheat cause it's not actually what it looks like.
RJ:It's me trying to micromanage my wife.
RJ:It's a Rocketbook.
Tom:Okay.
RJ:Which is it feels like paper and use special pens and you can make your
RJ:notes and then just wipe them off.
RJ:But you take a picture on your phone and it uploads it to a thing.
RJ:So I kind of got it as a as a present for my wife saying
RJ:maybe this might work for you.
RJ:Cause you can take all your notes and she went nah, I hate it.
RJ:I want bits of paper that I can throw all around the room.
RJ:Okay.
RJ:So it's come to me now, but I just use whatever is there when I'm writing
RJ:stuff down and have like notebooks and then they're put in the bin.
RJ:Cause I never look back.
RJ:It's not, it's about churning through the stuff in my head rather than
RJ:going back and referencing stuff.
RJ:I'm not a referency person.
Tom:And you don't have a special pen and a special book for each
Tom:project or anything like that?
RJ:No I don't even have a special place.
RJ:I can write more or less, once I'm in the zone it doesn't matter where
RJ:I am because I'm in the story and that's all that matters and I'm off.
RJ:As long as I have a computer with a good keyboard.
Tom:Okay.
Tom:So do you have a desktop computer or do you have a laptop that
Tom:you can just take wherever?
RJ:I have two laptops.
RJ:I have this one we're on now, which is a Microsoft surface
RJ:laptop, which I love a lot.
RJ:It's keyboard is really nice.
RJ:And it just works.
RJ:Works really well with Word because it's made by Microsoft, so it should do.
RJ:And then I have a Microsoft Surface Go to like a tablet with a detachable keyboard.
Tom:I've seen those.
Tom:Yeah.
RJ:Yeah.
RJ:And I take that with me places telling myself that I'm gonna write
RJ:on the train, but I'd never do.
RJ:It just goes in my computer bag and it was a lot of money that I
RJ:never use, but I atone for that.
RJ:Just between you and me.
Tom:But it looks good.
Tom:It looks good and you could.
Tom:It's better to have it and not need it.
Tom:Than need it and not have it.
RJ:Yeah.
RJ:Yeah.
RJ:It's actually what I use for a lot of edits and copy edits because it
RJ:changes, I use it as a tablet and it changes the way you look at the text.
RJ:Because it used to be that publishers would send you it printed out,
RJ:but they don't do that anymore.
RJ:With covid has provided a convenient excuse for them not to.
RJ:So I use tablet or I use, I used to use my Kindle, but it's killed Kindle for me now.
RJ:I can't read anything off it because it puts my head into
RJ:that, oh I'm criticizing this.
RJ:I'm looking for the things that are wrong with it.
RJ:And I can't enjoy anything to read on it because I'm just...
Tom:You've got that association, it's work.
RJ:Yeah.
RJ:Yeah.
RJ:Yeah.
RJ:Even the authors I really love, if I start on Kindle now I just grind to a halt.
RJ:They are still actual books, which I feel quite cheated actually.
RJ:But my sons, my son has stolen my Kindle anyway.
RJ:I'll have this, if you're not using it.
RJ:That's because he reads an awful lot stuff and he won't throw his books out, so now
RJ:the house it's just all full of his books.
Tom:Yeah.
Tom:I'm the same.
Tom:It's just I've tried reading on the Kindle, but there's just
Tom:something of the tactile nature.
Tom:I think it's, it's the reading equivalent of a sugary drink.
Tom:It's just, you have it.
Tom:And you know how far you've got until the end because you can feel
Tom:it between your thumb and forefinger.
RJ:I like to fold pages.
RJ:I know some people don't, but I like to fold pages because then if I reread that
RJ:book, I'll be able to see where I stopped.
RJ:And I really liked that.
RJ:These are my footprints in this book.
RJ:I can see where I've been.
Tom:Yeah.
RJ:I'm not a things person.
RJ:I'm not attached to a book as a physical object I'm attached to what's in it.
RJ:There's a few that are special books to me, but most of them
RJ:they're just a machine for getting the story into my head.
Tom:Yeah.
Tom:I don't get precious over the individual editions of books.
Tom:Cause I know some people would react in horror at folding a page or
Tom:breaking a spine or stuff like that.
Tom:I like a well-worn book.
Tom:It shows how much I loved it and have read it.
Tom:And if I wear it to the point it's unreadable, then I buy another copy.
Tom:And there's a joy in knowing that I've worn out a book that I need a new one.
Tom:So yeah, I don't get precious over books.
RJ:There is weird ones though, like I love Patrick O'Brien.
RJ:And some of the books of his I have are falling apart, but I have to
RJ:replace them with the same ones because the covers, a really beautiful
RJ:drawings, paintings of ships.
RJ:And for me that's an art object, slightly different.
RJ:They're really, I like ships.
RJ:There's a beauty to sailing ships.
RJ:I just really enjoy.
Tom:So are you quite attached to the cover art of your own books?
Tom:Is that a long process or is that something that the publishers
Tom:just go, you're having this?
RJ:Yeah they just go, you're having this and you go, oh, okay.
RJ:And I did have quite a bit of trouble when my first books came because they
RJ:were not how I imagined my covers.
RJ:My agent eventually just said to me, look, these are the covers are not for you.
RJ:They're a vehicle to sell your book.
RJ:they're to let people pick it up, that's all they're for.
RJ:They're not for you to enjoy it.
RJ:And I was like, oh alright okay then and I can disassociate myself to a degree.
RJ:But yeah, I think if I was in charge to be very different.
RJ:I like art, so I think i don't think anyone would buy them.
RJ:I think people would just go what on earth is that book about, I'm not touching it.
RJ:Because you don't realize until you within it, how much it's coded.
Tom:It is coded!
Tom:Yeah.
Tom:I've heard that from a lot of authors actually, who've been the
Tom:same of, they haven't liked it, but they go you're in this genre.
Tom:If you want people to pick it up, they have to recognize it as a type
Tom:of book they'll like from the cover.
RJ:Yeah.
RJ:My first book, the Wounded Kingdom books.
RJ:I was quite convinced they were crime books.
RJ:It just happened to take place in a fantasy world.
RJ:And my agent just went, no they're epic fantasy books.
RJ:That's good.
RJ:What?
RJ:Why are they epic fantasy books?
RJ:Because that means I can sell them.
RJ:Okay then.
RJ:That's how it works.
RJ:That's how it works.
RJ:And he did!
RJ:So he knows what he's doing, but yeah.
RJ:But to me they're crime novels.
RJ:They're structured as crime novels.
RJ:But it's because a big love of mine is crime.
RJ:And then yeah, I've learned now, marketing knows what it's doing.
RJ:Nobody understands it.
RJ:Not even sure marketing understands it, but they make it work.
RJ:And obviously my books are sold.
RJ:So...
Tom:To burst the magic bubble of your love of fantasy and crime.
Tom:Obviously some are under a pseudonym.
RJ:Yeah yeah.
RJ:There's another me.
Tom:Yeah, so how did that come about, was that a conscious conversation with
Tom:your agent or publishers to say, if you want to release these books, it
Tom:will be better under another name?
Tom:Or was it an idea that you thought these are so different that I
Tom:might have to create a persona?
RJ:I would liked to have release it all under my name, if it was up to me.
RJ:But it was my agent's advice not to.
RJ:I do wonder if somewhere buried in my contract is a thing saying that
RJ:this is RJ Barker, it's who you are.
RJ:You are a fantasy writer, you have to be that.
RJ:Cause I don't read my contracts.
RJ:That's what he's paid for.
RJ:I wouldn't understand them anyway.
RJ:But it's quite nice cause when somebody gets in touch with you about them you
RJ:immediately know what book it's about.
Tom:Yeah.
RJ:Which I wouldn't otherwise.
RJ:Yeah, and, and weirdly the books have come out as RJ Dark, which is my other persona.
RJ:Actually get more email about those because they don't sell
RJ:nearly as much than I do about the fantasy books, they seem to..
RJ:The people who read them seem to really connect with them, which is really lovely.
RJ:And they're probably the oldest idea that I've ever gone back to.
RJ:Everything else is new, but they're an idea I've had for well over a decade.
RJ:Those two characters have been sort of, I'm really attached to them.
RJ:And whether they sell or not, I'm going to continue writing them
RJ:just because I enjoy doing it.
RJ:So it's kind of a bit of a jolly for me.
Tom:What changed with those characters?
Tom:That you had them percolate in your head, and then suddenly
Tom:they snapped to the forefront.
Tom:Now I've got a story for them.
Tom:What was the missing piece that was like, I need to write this now?
RJ:There's two, two characters in the book.
RJ:There's Mal Jones, who's a pretend medium.
RJ:He never changed.
RJ:He was always the same.
RJ:He's personality wise, quite close to me in sense of humor and the fact
RJ:that he's terrified of violence, so he'll runaway and stuff like that.
RJ:Otherwise very much not like he's an ex-drug addict, and I
RJ:am too lazy to be a drug addict.
RJ:It takes a lot of work.
RJ:I've seen addicts, terribly tiring.
RJ:And and then his friend, Jackie.
RJ:And Jackie changed quite a lot.
RJ:He was various different people and he was never quite..
RJ:His personality was always the same, but who he was.
RJ:And it wasn't until I settled on Jackie as this Sikh boy raised by a white
RJ:family on a predominantly white council estate who doesn't belong anywhere.
RJ:And that kind of crystallized it in these two outsiders and
RJ:why they would be together and why they're such good friends.
RJ:But I'd always been trying to tell the story of what brought them together.
RJ:And that was a murder mystery and it exists, and I will.
RJ:And each time I done it I got about 20,000 words in and then I just
RJ:realized it was like a flash, just that's like novel number three or four.
RJ:That's not your first book.
RJ:And the plot for the first book just landed in my head.
RJ:As I did with Age of Assassins, my first book sold, I thought
RJ:we've got to go write this.
RJ:And I did, I just wrote it.
RJ:Flew straight to it.
RJ:And as soon as you've done that, when you finished your book, it's
RJ:a psychological kind of step.
RJ:Cause you can do it then.
RJ:You, you know, these characters, I know how they talk and
RJ:I know how they interact.
RJ:And I know how to react to situations.
RJ:It's just a matter of throwing things up and then letting it write
RJ:itself, it's really fun to do.
RJ:But fantasy is harder.
RJ:That's more you have to make stuff up, but writing in our world,
RJ:everyone knows what it's like already.
RJ:So yeah, that's what changed.
RJ:I just suddenly realized I was writing the wrong book.
RJ:So once I'd written the right book it was easy then.
Tom:Okay.
Tom:So are you planning a prequel book then for book three?
Tom:Is it something that?
RJ:No, books one, two and three are written.
RJ:They're in the editing process.
RJ:Probably book four or five will be that, but it's not a prequel.
RJ:It's about how that past comes back to bite them.
RJ:How things that were, that have never been discussed or overlooked
RJ:can suddenly reappear much later in your life and cause problems.
RJ:And it revolves around something that they thought was not a mystery
RJ:and it turns out it is, or is it?
RJ:And I like, I like stuff like that.
RJ:And it pushes their friendship pushes them into an adversarial
RJ:position against each other.
RJ:So you have to stretch that, which is quite fun.
RJ:I'm looking forward to doing it.
Tom:And so is that going to be your next project?
Tom:So you're editing the earlier books now, or is there another fantasy
Tom:that's gonna sort of space between the books that you've written?
RJ:I write a lot.
RJ:I love writing I really, the act of doing it, I've always said this, I don't really,
RJ:as a writer, hold to the idea of genre.
RJ:I think it's a useful tool for selling things.
RJ:It's all just clothes for telling stories, whether it's fantasy or
RJ:science fiction or crime or whatever.
RJ:I've just got back my edit letter for my newest fantasy book, which
RJ:is vaguely Robin Hood based and the things she pointed out were
RJ:the things that bugged me about it.
RJ:And she said, we can go ahead with this as it is if you want,
RJ:but I did notice these things.
RJ:Maybe we could mess about with them?
RJ:And because they were exactly the same things I thought about.
RJ:I went, yeah, yeah, maybe we should.
RJ:So I'm doing that.
RJ:That's the thing I should be doing.
RJ:That's my proper job.
RJ:I'm going to do that.
RJ:I've got an edit to do such probably about a month and a half, and then I've
RJ:got a copy of it to do for the second Mal and Jackie book, that's not as hard.
RJ:That's just, can I put up with this?
RJ:Yeah.
RJ:Yeah.
RJ:You can take that comma out.
RJ:I use far too many commas.
RJ:Um, and then um, I wrote like, a cosy crime book.
RJ:My agent sent me edits for that.
RJ:So I've got that to go through, but that's a speculative project.
RJ:So that, that's what I can fit it in.
RJ:I'll come back and do that, give myself a month.
RJ:And then I've got the second in my new fantasy trilogy to write.
RJ:It sounds like an awful lot when I do it like this.
RJ:And then I said to myself, I'm taking Christmas and New Year off.
RJ:I'm not writing.
RJ:I'm not doing any of these things I meant to be doing.
RJ:I'm not doing anything.
RJ:So I started a new book and I'm like 17,000 words into that now
RJ:that I'm quite excited about.
RJ:That's like a thriller.
RJ:I was just laying in bed and I thought, could you do Jack
RJ:Reacher in England without guns?
RJ:Could you do something like that?
RJ:No, you couldn't.
RJ:And then I woke up in the morning and thought, oh no, you can.
RJ:I can see how that could work.
RJ:I just started that and I'm quite pleased that I did.
RJ:You never know if it will be anything but yeah.
RJ:So that's what I'm doing.
RJ:I'm just writing all the time.
Tom:So you don't do one project beginning to end, start a
Tom:new project beginning to end?
Tom:There's various projects on and you're kind of spinning
Tom:the plates and multitasking.
RJ:I think in a way I do.
RJ:I'll just write the fantasy novel.
RJ:And then I finished the fantasy novel and then I moved on to the next thing
RJ:while it went with my editors to look at and then I do the next thing.
RJ:And then when I'm editing the fantasy novel, I'll probably edit
RJ:the fantasy novel in the morning.
RJ:And then if I'm still excited about the new project, write
RJ:a bit of that in the evenings.
RJ:Do like a couple thousand words.
RJ:Cause they're very different voices.
RJ:So I do tend to be stuck doing one thing mostly.
RJ:And then I just line them up.
RJ:I've got to cause I write quite quickly.
Tom:Yeah.
RJ:I tend to blast through it.
RJ:So yeah, I'm not actually spinning plates as that much.
RJ:I have all my plates lined up and I'm moving them on as quickly as possible.
Tom:And when you said you edit in the morning and write in the
Tom:evening, do you find that you're more like analytical in the mornings
Tom:and more creative in the evenings?
Tom:Or is it just, as you said, there are different voices and it's one
Tom:voice tends to benefit the morning or tends to benefit the evening?
RJ:It's more that the edit has to be done because I'm being paid for that.
RJ:So I'll do that.
RJ:I'll do that in the morning.
RJ:And then if I still feel like I've got things that are going to then I'll
RJ:write right in afternoon or the evening.
RJ:But it doesn't matter if I don't, so I could be tired,
RJ:I do get tired quite quickly.
RJ:But actual writing is the easiest part of it for me.
RJ:It's just, it's like playing.
RJ:It's like doing a video game or something like that.
RJ:It's not, it's not actual work.
RJ:I'm not sat there working stuff out.
RJ:I'm just playing.
RJ:I don't plan anything.
RJ:I have a couple of ideas I want to touch on as I go through.
RJ:And sometimes I know the end, mostly I do, but it's just as surprise
RJ:to me as the reader half the time.
Tom:So how long is a typical writing session for you in one particular day?
Tom:Do you have a word count or is it just a couple of hours or is it,
Tom:cause it's play, it's just when the whim things you and just I'm going
Tom:to start now and then I'm done.
Tom:I'm going to stop now.
RJ:I write Monday to Friday, when boys are at school and my wife's working.
RJ:And I try and do a minimum of a thousand words, at least.
RJ:Sometimes it'll be more, sometimes it'd be two.
RJ:Sometimes it'd be three.
RJ:And usually that's about two or three hours at most.
RJ:And then then I'll play the video games quite a lot of the time, which is
RJ:important research as everybody knows.
RJ:If I'm editing, I tend to edit for four or five hours a day.
RJ:Cause in my head I just think of it as reading.
RJ:I'm just kind of thinking oh, does that does that read how I want it
RJ:to read and just moving stuff about.
RJ:It's a bit, even though writing is fun, I think it's more intensive
RJ:on my brain than editing is.
RJ:Editing is putting things in the right place, so that sentences
RJ:feel like the right shape.
RJ:And so that the questions my editor has are answered.
RJ:But I never know if I am actually answering them.
RJ:And I'm just, I just thought well I hope this is what she means.
RJ:But it's a different kind of head.
RJ:It's not as tiring.
RJ:Now you've made me think about it because I don't, I'm not
RJ:thinking about things person.
RJ:I'm not sure I could write and then edit.
RJ:I think I might be exhausted.
Tom:Yeah.
Tom:I also think, because you said it was like play and like a computer game
Tom:or reading, it's the release after a very analytical sort of time where
Tom:you're being very critical of things that you've done before, and then
Tom:you can just well, I'm just going to make some stuff up and have fun.
Tom:So it makes sense to do it that way.
Tom:Absolutely.
Tom:And when you finish a writing session, because again, I've spoken to many
Tom:authors and they everyone's different.
Tom:Do you like to have a stopping off point of okay, I'm writing a scene
Tom:or a selection of scenes, and then there's a pause, a stopping point.
Tom:Or do you like to leave it mid sentence, mid scene so that when you
Tom:come back the next day, it's easier to pick up where you left off because
Tom:it's in the middle of the action?
RJ:No, I like to finish at a place.
RJ:Usually it tends to work out I finish at the end of the chapter.
RJ:Or the end of a scene within a chapter, but it's usually the end of a chapter.
RJ:I usually write a chapter.
RJ:But what I'll do is as things occur to me, I put them as notes
RJ:at the bottom of the chapter.
RJ:So when I finished the chapter, I copy and paste those into a new document.
RJ:And save that document, which I've learned you have to do then.
RJ:Not the next day when you're halfway through and your computer
RJ:goes off and you lose it all.
RJ:So I do that.
RJ:So if I'm on chapter 11, I'll paste my thoughts that I've had.
RJ:They might not be for chapter 12, they might be for like chapter 50
RJ:or whatever, and that's carried forward throughout the whole book.
RJ:So as I, so things occur to me.
RJ:I don't use all of it, but I set out the next chapter for the next
RJ:morning and I come in and say, right, I've got a blank page.
RJ:I've got some ideas I can throw at it.
RJ:So that's the way I do it.
RJ:I don't find starting hard.
RJ:It's always exciting to start writing.
RJ:What we're doing, where is it going to go?
Tom:Because you said, you're not someone who really creates an outline
Tom:beforehand, you know your end point and the fun and the enjoyments creating it.
Tom:But you also said earlier and it's something I wanted to pick up on
Tom:that fantasy can be harder than crime fiction because you're actually
Tom:creating a world and possibly languages and things like that.
Tom:What is the hardest part of starting something new?
Tom:Is it creating a three-dimensional character.
Tom:Is it the world-building?
Tom:It's just coming up with a fitting name?
Tom:And which bit do you find the easiest out of those sort of things?
RJ:I don't really think of world-building and characters
RJ:and all these things as separate.
RJ:I find them very much the same thing.
RJ:I'll usually have a few ideas.
RJ:Like when I started doing The Bone Ships, I had this idea of a
RJ:world without wood and big ships.
RJ:And I had the idea of a matriarchy when I started and then I started with
RJ:the character of Joron, whose someone referred to as a drunk xenophobe when
RJ:we meet him and that's quite fair.
RJ:He's not very nice.
RJ:And then it was just seeing where it goes.
RJ:And the world, everything I learn everything about
RJ:my world on my first draft.
RJ:And then I come back and I go through again.
RJ:And by the time that first draft you have quite a solid idea but world building
RJ:to me is time I could be writing.
RJ:I'm immensely lazy.
RJ:I don't see the point in doing work that I'm not gonna use.
RJ:So my world is you see what you need to see as you go along and
RJ:then I'll work back and see how it works on the second draft.
RJ:So it makes sense.
RJ:I never think of it as hard, quite frightened of thinking it was hard
RJ:because I think how you think of things, it becomes a self fulfilling prophecy.
RJ:The more I think, oh boy, if I can't do it, makes it more
RJ:likely that I can't do it.
RJ:So just think yeah, it'll all work out.
RJ:All right.
RJ:If it don't work out it will be fine.
RJ:And I have a few ideas of something that I think might be cool.
RJ:Like when I wrote The Bone Ships, I had the scene where we first see
RJ:one of the sea monsters, because that was quite clear in my head.
RJ:Like, yeah, I want, I want to do that.
RJ:I want big sea monsters.
RJ:And the thing I'm writing now, I had this really clear idea of
RJ:unrealistically massive forest, and I want it to sell that to the reader.
RJ:and, And there's other stuff, like often the things that excite me in a
RJ:story are things that I can't tell you.
RJ:Cause it might be things that don't happen until book like not in book
RJ:one but it happens in book two, it happens in book three, but um..
Tom:You're seeding it.
RJ:Yeah, yeah.
RJ:They're the things like, like the thing I'm doing now, the first books
RJ:the story and it's self contained, but it's almost all entirely set up
RJ:stuff that's going to come later.
RJ:And as a reader you're come and think, oh, God, I can see the arc.
RJ:I can see how he did that and what this was set for and it's
RJ:not great to be what you expect.
RJ:So yeah, but it is all it's all very subconscious what I
RJ:do, I do n't think about it.
Tom:Has that ever got you stuck at a point where you're writing a later
Tom:book in a series, but something's happened in an earlier book that the
Tom:physics or the laws and the rules of the world deny you the thing that
Tom:you want to write in say book three.
Tom:But it's impossible because of something that happened in book one.
Tom:Cause sometimes you get fans who are very pernickety and say, oh that
Tom:couldn't happen because of this.
Tom:And has that, have you had an editor pick something up in a redraft about that?
RJ:No.
RJ:No, really.
RJ:Because to me, that moment where you do a thing and think that
RJ:can't happen in this world.
RJ:That's the fun.
RJ:The fun is thinking well, how can I make it happen.
RJ:In the third Assassins book, I kind of a rough idea of where it was starting.
RJ:I knew where it was going.
RJ:I knew the end of the book, because it was the end of the
RJ:emotional arc of the whole trilogy.
RJ:And I got to a point and I wrote a sentence and the sentence disobeyed an
RJ:entire set up plot I done throughout the first two books and it just ruined it.
RJ:On one level, I thought, well, the sensible thing to do now is to delete that
RJ:and just carry on as if it never happened.
RJ:But there was a much noisier voice in the back of my head going oh, come on.
RJ:Let's just see what happens.
RJ:Let's just go with it.
RJ:And it ended up being the engine for the entire plot.
RJ:And why this would happen and the thing I liked the most about it
RJ:was that I knew that one sentence shouldn't work and I made it work.
RJ:So no, I don't.
RJ:Yeah, I'm not ever.
RJ:And if somebody says, oh you did this in this book and later on
RJ:this happened, you just, yeah magic, it's magic, magic happens.
RJ:And I'm not really into the idea of canon, especially with fantasy.
RJ:I think fantasy as, as mythic.
RJ:As it's the continuation of the stories we would tell each other
RJ:around a fire side in the woods where we didn't know what was out there.
RJ:And mythic does not have to make sense.
Tom:Yeah.
RJ:The Bone Ships are deliberately set up at the beginning to give
RJ:you this kind of feel that maybe this is a story you're being told
RJ:by someone in a place somewhere.
RJ:So I don't have to have to obey rules as it goes through.
RJ:It's a story talent got it wrong.
RJ:That's deliberate, test actually.
Tom:Unreliable narrator.
RJ:Yeah.
RJ:All my narrators are highly unreliable, especially me.
RJ:I'm the worst, but yeah, I don't hold to the ideas of
RJ:canon and also I hate answers.
RJ:Sometimes you'll see a reviewer say, oh I particularly like this.
RJ:Can't wait for him to explain why this happened.
RJ:I'll just be sat there thinking well, it's not gonna happen,
RJ:I'm not interested in that.
RJ:I'm following a thing that interests me and that's the story
RJ:I'm telling and I'm not going to explain all that sort of stuff.
RJ:That's just set dressing, enjoy it.
Tom:So you don't get tied to researching things for accuracy?
RJ:No, I'm quite lucky that I have quite a broad knowledge base to start off with.
RJ:And that's quite fun.
RJ:But I know my own personality and I'm quite fascinated by stuff.
RJ:I love history.
RJ:I tried writing a book set in Napoleonic Wars.
RJ:And all I did was read about Napoleonic Wars for three months.
RJ:I didn't take notes.
RJ:I just read stuff about Napoleon.
RJ:Honestly right, I can't do that.
RJ:It's just not how my mind works.
RJ:So in The Bone Ships, my dad was a sailor.
RJ:So I knew a reasonable amount around ships.
RJ:I've got loads of naval fiction and books on the Navy that I liked at that time.
RJ:And I thought, I'm going to use those and just try and create a feel of the sea.
RJ:That's what I'm interested in.
RJ:I'm not interested in actually being technically right.
RJ:There are other writers that can do that for you if that's
RJ:what, it's that's your thing.
RJ:And I'm a great believer that have a little bit of stuff
RJ:that people go, that's right.
RJ:Then you'll sell it.
RJ:You can sell it on that.
RJ:There was a reviewer who quite rightly in the review, pointed out
RJ:that said look, big ships to the line have a massive supply train.
RJ:That goes right back and and they do it in our history, England.
RJ:So much of our language and our landscape is to do with our sailing history.
RJ:And I knew that.
RJ:But they have no place in the story I'm telling.
RJ:It's just not about that.
RJ:It's like I could have gone out and done, not even research,
RJ:just putting the knowledge that I have about that in these books.
RJ:And I'd have bored 90% of my readers silly, with this stuff that's personally
RJ:fascinating to me, but not them.
RJ:So I think research is often over-rated.
RJ:And then wing the rest of it.
Tom:Yeah, I think we're all vessels born out of our experiences and our
Tom:influences and things that inspire us.
Tom:And I think there's definitely a strong argument in creative writing and
Tom:speculative fiction that you just distill what you've learned and what you've read
Tom:and what inspires you uh, to create.
Tom:cause everything we write is a remix of everything that's gone before.
RJ:I think my aim is to create something believable, not to make something real.
RJ:And they're very different, I'm not interested in realism,
RJ:interested in selling you something that you can buy into.
RJ:And for anything you write, there is a degree of people who will know a lot
RJ:about something, like swordfighting.
RJ:I know enough about sword fighting to get away with it for most people.
RJ:But I have friends who really know about sword fighting and my
RJ:sword fights they'd just be like, piss off RJ, you can't do that.
RJ:But that's because they know, and that's that thing.
RJ:And you can't write for them.
RJ:You can't write for those people.
RJ:Well, you can, but I'm not interested in it.
RJ:Because it annoys them, it's funny.
RJ:Especially the friends of mine, it's even funnier.
RJ:But yeah, you're kind of, you're writing to sell it to as many people as possible.
RJ:Not selling in a physically take your money way.
RJ:Sell in a, buy into my world and that's my joy.
RJ:Because God knows if you know about sailing ships, if it's your
RJ:thing, don't read The Bone Ships.
RJ:(laughs)
RJ:I've got a friend, who's a scuba diver and a sailor.
RJ:And I sent it to him and he sent me back the best bit of criticism I've ever had.
RJ:And he just said, RJ this is clearly the best thing you've written yet.
RJ:Beautiful engrossing world and I loved it, but you know fuck all about boats.
RJ:And I love that.
RJ:I'm just yeah.
RJ:Yeah.
RJ:But it sold it to him.
RJ:He said, I know it's wrong, but I'm in it.
Tom:Yeah.
Tom:I think it's compelling characters and the adventures that they go on.
Tom:And you will follow a compelling character anywhere in any world that doesn't make
Tom:sense, Alice in Wonderland for example, but it's making well, she's not compelling
Tom:character actually, she's very reactive.
Tom:That's a terrible example.
Tom:But but having,
RJ:The world is the character in Alice In Wonderland.
RJ:It doesn't have to follow rules.
RJ:It's brilliant.
Tom:Yeah, if you make it compelling enough, then people will have that
Tom:intrigue and will forgive a lot because they want the answers to
Tom:the questions that you're posing.
Tom:Do you find then that when you've got an end in mind and stuff like
Tom:that, that you're asking yourself questions that you want to answer is
Tom:that more your approach to plotting?
Tom:Or is it just a ripping yarn?
Tom:And it's just, this is a really cool plot that I'd like to see panned out.
RJ:I don't even think it's that conscious with me.
RJ:I think I just start and then I write a book and then at the
RJ:end I find out what it's about.
RJ:Oh, I was writing about that.
RJ:Okay.
RJ:There were a couple of things that, that I try and keep in mind.
RJ:I've got a friend who's a screenwriter.
RJ:And he told me the greatest thing about characters is that if you know what they
RJ:want and what they need, and that those two things working against each other.
RJ:You have a character set up then that works for most of my characters,
RJ:like Jaron in The Bone Ships.
RJ:He thinks he wants to be a brilliant naval commander.
RJ:Actually, what he wants is a friend and to fit in somewhere.
RJ:And he never really realizes that, but that's his story going through.
RJ:But mostly it's very exploratory.
RJ:Feel that word's panster, which is an ugly word, it's just not nice.
RJ:Exploratory.
RJ:That's a good line.
Tom:Yes.
Tom:Well actually, it's the...
Tom:This won't make sense for any of our listeners now because
Tom:that's far in the future.
Tom:But the episode that just was released yesterday the author describes himself
Tom:as a pantser and I was just like, you need to explain that to the audience,
Tom:because that's very much an industry term.
Tom:Um, It's writing by the seat of your pants.
Tom:But yeah, it's, it is, I don't like it either, which is like, you're
Tom:describing it, you're explaining what you've just said, but yeah,
Tom:exploratory we'll use that.
RJ:I don't know if I feel like I'm..
RJ:Right, I've got friends that plan and plan a detailed story out.
RJ:And they're sitting there and they might write like 30 or 40,000 words plan.
RJ:But all I do is I do that as a first draft of my book.
RJ:It's the same thing.
RJ:It's just calling it different bits of the process, but it's the same process.
RJ:I'm doing a plan.
RJ:It's just most of it the reader will get to read.
RJ:Hopefully, fingers crossed.
Tom:And how long does a first draft usually take you?
Tom:Would you say?
RJ:Well, there's a thing.
RJ:Um, Varied amount of time.
RJ:I wrote the cosy crime book which we've got edits for, I wrote the first
RJ:draft of that in two and a half weeks.
RJ:So 75,000 word book.
RJ:And it was just really easy, but as a lot of work to do on it.
RJ:So that, that tells you something.
RJ:Age of assassins, my first fantasy novel, I wrote in six weeks.
Tom:Okay.
RJ:But that was steroid assisted cause, cause I was quite poorly at the time and
RJ:I had a course of steroids and that was brilliant for writing, but look a bit like
RJ:a moon faced weirdo, but you write a lot.
RJ:And then each book, each of the fantasy book has got longer and longer since.
RJ:I think it took me 11 months to write The Bone Ships Wake, which
RJ:is the third Bone Ships book.
RJ:And it took me about 10 months to write the second one.
RJ:I think the second one was the first time I really didn't enjoy writing a book.
RJ:It was hard.
RJ:Just because sometimes you have a crisis of confidence, I think in the
RJ:middle of writing that book coincided with the first book coming out.
RJ:And it's a really, I'm not stressing or sort of person who gets help about stuff.
RJ:It's not in my nature, but even though it's subconscious, when a book is
RJ:coming up to release and you don't know what people are going to be thinking,
RJ:it's there in the back of your head.
RJ:And I think I was halfway through this book thinking, "have I
RJ:just written something terrible?
RJ:Oh, no."
RJ:and that kind of ground to a halt.
RJ:Crime books, I can do a 70,000 word novel that's reasonably good in three months.
RJ:The first Mal and Jackie book took three months.
RJ:The second one took three months.
RJ:70, yeah, 70,000 words in three months isn't unrealistic for me.
RJ:Can do that.
RJ:I don't have to do a real job though.
RJ:I think that's important that people understand that.
RJ:This is all I do.
RJ:And I think one of the most useful, because people always after advice
RJ:and I'm not really good at advice, because I think we're all very unique
RJ:people that need to figure out.
RJ:But something I do that I think is useful for me, is I give
RJ:myself permission to be rubbish.
RJ:I just write, I'm going to write a book and it's going to be awful.
Tom:Yeah.
RJ:And that's fine because once you've finished it, you can make it good.
RJ:It's much easier to make something awful good than it is to write
RJ:something really good off the bat.
RJ:The works in the edits for me.
RJ:Write a book reasonably quickly, then edit better.
Tom:Yeah.
Tom:How long is it?
Tom:Do the edits vary as well?
Tom:Have they taken longer as you've written more books or are they getting
Tom:shorter as you get longer first drafts?
RJ:Tend to write quite closely to what you get in the end, reasonably.
RJ:The next fantasy book, I think we making some bigger changes.
RJ:I wrote it in first person.
RJ:And then my editor said, yeah, are you sure that it's the right point of view?
RJ:And there'd been something annoying me about it, I don't know what it was.
RJ:And as soon as she said that, I just thought, yeah, you're right.
RJ:That's why I missed it.
RJ:It's not a first person book.
RJ:I write the first person when I'm tired.
RJ:Yeah, if I'm tired and writing then what I'm writing will slip into
RJ:first person as it goes through.
RJ:And I just thought, yeah, cause it's not worked for me.
RJ:It's easy.
RJ:It's easiest form for me, it flows out of me when I'm doing first person.
RJ:And I was like, yeah, I was slacking, this book, slacking
RJ:and writing in first person.
RJ:And by changing it to third, it allows me to do a lot of stuff
RJ:that I thought about and didn't do.
RJ:So this edit will take longer cause I'm doing that.
RJ:But it's usually is about two and a half months for 150,000 word book.
RJ:Maybe a month, two weeks for 70,000 words.
RJ:But depends on how much work there is to do, really.
RJ:Can be quite quick or can be quite slow.
RJ:Changeable like the weather.
Tom:Talk about changeable, I was going to ask consistency with the next one.
Tom:With your editor, do you have the same editor for all your books or do
Tom:you have a one for a certain trilogy?
Tom:How have they changed over time?
RJ:No, I have Jenny Hills at Orbit.
RJ:Who does all my fantasy stuff and I'm very much a creature of habit.
RJ:No, I'm not.
RJ:That's a lie.
RJ:I'm a creature of chaos.
Tom:You're changeable like the weather, RJ.
Tom:You just said it (laughs).
RJ:But when it comes to working with people, I try to only work with people
RJ:I will be friends with in real life.
RJ:It's like, my agent.
RJ:The minute I spoke to him, I just thought, yeah.
RJ:Yeah, I want to be your client.
RJ:And we get on, he makes me laugh.
RJ:And the reason I like being with his agency is all the people he employs.
RJ:I also get on with and think are funny.
RJ:I think you've got good ethic.
RJ:And orbit are very similar to that.
RJ:I get along with them all like them all, Jenny's..
RJ:Jenny knows what I'm trying to do.
RJ:And she always makes my books more me and I trust her.
RJ:And if she left orbit to go somewhere else, I would probably want to follow.
RJ:Because she's my editor and I like having her as my editor.
RJ:And other editors probably great but I've not worked with them.
RJ:So I don't know.
RJ:And then my crime ones I have Nicole, that's a different type of editing.
RJ:They tend to be quite, because it's an indie publisher, so it's
RJ:not quite as in-depth maybe.
RJ:Crime books are, I said easier and easier is not the right word..
RJ:It's easier that you don't have to keep this whole world in your
RJ:head and make loads of notes about what things are called, which
RJ:infuriates me because I never do it.
RJ:And then I go, what was that thing called?
RJ:There's big gaps in my first drafts.
RJ:Tree thing, man, but um, a crime book you don't have to do that.
RJ:Cause you know what everything's called and you can say car, and
RJ:people know what a car looks like.
RJ:It's a block of flats, people know what it looks like.
RJ:But a fantasy plot is quite a sort of spacey, airy thing.
RJ:A lot has to happen and cause I'll tootle along and what is considered pacey in
RJ:fantasy isn't maybe in other genres.
RJ:But a crime plot is like clockwork and has to all clock in
RJ:together, not clocking together.
RJ:And that's the hard work bit, it's making it all, making sure that person
RJ:that's there in chapter one is the right place and they're doing the right thing.
RJ:With the Mal and Jackie books, it just seems to work in my head.
RJ:Other stuff I've done, it hasn't, like the cosy crime one, I have to go
RJ:back to that and go through it again.
RJ:But the Mal and Jackie, so there's not actually much editing done on those.
RJ:It's more copy edits.
RJ:And my, my agent does edits too and stuff that's going out unseen.
RJ:Like stuff that goes to Orbit's a bit different because I'm their author, and
RJ:there's an expectation they're going to pick it up because I'm doing all right.
RJ:But other stuff that goes out on spec it, Ed will edit it.
RJ:Ed Wilson, my agent.
RJ:And he's probably actually the hardest editor that I'll deal with.
RJ:Because he will just write stuff like, stop being an idiot.
RJ:Or this writing's awful.
RJ:You can do better.
RJ:Thanks Ed.
RJ:Building my confidence up, but I can hear his voice, he makes me laugh.
RJ:So yeah, but I like editing.
RJ:I like being challenged.
RJ:Think, I think that's when often the most interesting stuff will come out, because
RJ:your editor will say you can't do this.
RJ:And I don't hear that.
RJ:I hear, find a way to do this thing that you clearly want to do.
RJ:So I don't take a lot of stuff out, but I'll change how things work.
RJ:And Jenny's generally right.
RJ:The only time I've ever gone against her advice is um, in The Bone Ships,
RJ:I think there is a three, four pages of how to load your weapon.
RJ:And she was just like, This is too much.
RJ:It's too much detail.
RJ:I was like, no Jenny.
RJ:You can't write a naval book without an overly complicated
RJ:sequence where you load the cannons.
RJ:It's just not, it's just not a naval book otherwise.
RJ:You have to have that.
RJ:Yeah.
RJ:It's the rules, Jenny.
RJ:And she's like oh, okay.
RJ:You can have that, but you're taking this bit out later on.
RJ:I'm like, oh okay, you can have that.
Tom:So for you, what makes a good editor?
Tom:What is it about an editor that they bring to your writing that
Tom:you don't do automatically?
RJ:A good editor makes you more you.
RJ:Yeah, that's what they do.
RJ:They understand what you're doing and they improve it.
RJ:I'm a terrible editor.
RJ:Occasionally people contact me and say, would you have a look at my thing?
RJ:I always say no, because I'm a monster.
RJ:I'm not an editor, I'm a writer.
RJ:And if you send me something you'd written and can you have a look through this?
RJ:What I would do was try and rewrite that thing as though I'd done it.
RJ:And I have very particular interests.
RJ:You have 5,000 word short story.
RJ:Lovely.
RJ:But you mentioned a talking cat on page two, and I think
RJ:it should be about that cat.
RJ:Just get rid of the rest of it.
RJ:Yeah.
RJ:I want to know about the cat.
RJ:Tell me all about the cat.
RJ:And a good editor takes your thing and says this is what
RJ:they're trying to do with it.
RJ:With the final Bone Ships book, can't remember what it was.
RJ:It was two things that Jenny mentioned to me, one the beginning one at the end.
RJ:And they look like separate threads in the stories.
RJ:And I suddenly realized that actually, when she said it, that they weren't.
RJ:They were connected and they should be connected and I had not done that.
RJ:And it was just like somebody grabbed the whole book and just
RJ:twisted the ends and tightened it.
RJ:And that's what makes it good.
RJ:That she understands technically how things work, which I have no idea.
RJ:I have to Google what adjectives are.
RJ:I didn't go to school, I was going to be a rock star.
RJ:And that's what makes her good.
RJ:She knows it, and she tries to make it more me.
RJ:She's not, she's
Tom:Has that developed over time or was it like the first feedback she gave you
Tom:was like, oh my God, she understands me.
Tom:I'm sticking with this person.
Tom:That was straight away?
RJ:It's straight away.
RJ:It's the first comments came back with for Age of Assassins.
RJ:Yeah, you get it.
RJ:You get what I'm trying to do with this.
RJ:You understand and you're making it better.
RJ:That's what you're doing.
RJ:And it's been that way all along and I like her, hang
RJ:around with them if I wasn't.
RJ:And she just really good and she she's made everything I do better.
RJ:I'm quite sure you probably wouldn't have heard of me if
RJ:I'd had the different editor.
RJ:If I'd self-published them, you definitely wouldn't have done.
RJ:The assassin book, there is a big battle at the end of it.
RJ:And originally that wasn't there.
RJ:Because I wasn't interested in, I was interested in telling you who
RJ:done it, so it just finished with the crime, but that's who did it.
RJ:And Jenny was like, you are aware there's a war going on?
RJ:Well yeah, but I'm not interested in this.
RJ:She went, well your readers will be interested in that,
RJ:so you have to tell them.
RJ:Oh, okay then.
RJ:People hitting each other with swords, if I have to.
RJ:(laughs)
Tom:I think a lot of times with a lot of how-to writing guides and masterclasses
Tom:and all those things, it's very hard to define what makes a good editor.
Tom:And a lot of people just say, get an editor, get a professional editor.
Tom:You know, you will not be able to make your book as good as it can be without
Tom:it, but I think what you've said there is the most concise, brilliant, way.
Tom:Is that they make yourself better.
Tom:They make a better version of you and it's people who are maybe listening
Tom:to this and trying to get an editor.
Tom:If the person's coming back with what seems like good advice, but
Tom:they don't seem to understand you.
Tom:That's probably not going to be a lifelong working relationship.
RJ:I don't think it should, it should ever feel destructive what
RJ:you're getting from an editor.
RJ:And never does from Jenny.
RJ:Even when it, when it's let's take this out.
RJ:In Blood of Assassins, there was a, I tell this story a lot, if people
RJ:have listened to other podcasts with me in just skip the next minute.
RJ:There was originally an epilogue on the front of it.
RJ:No, not an epilogue prologue.
RJ:Yeah.
RJ:Yeah.
RJ:It's a difficult, I have problems.
Tom:C'mon, you've told the story before.
Tom:You can tell it again.
RJ:Yes.
RJ:Just get it right.
RJ:And this prologue, this lovely motif of an arrow in flight that I carried
RJ:through the entire text and it was attached to a very emotional moment
RJ:where somebody doing something.
RJ:And Jenny read that prologue.
RJ:And she went, this production be here, it's rubbish.
RJ:You've made a mistake.
RJ:People will hate the main character when you've sold them on liking
RJ:him and he does something awful.
RJ:And I wrote a five page email explaining why, and actually it should be there.
RJ:And what it did and why it was there and I think it should be there and why it
RJ:was there and I got to the end of this email and thought, I know she's right.
RJ:All my reasons are wrong.
RJ:That's nothing.
RJ:And it doesn't make us like you.
RJ:Okay.
RJ:So that went on and and that's what I like about her.
RJ:She's not frightened of telling me when I'm completely wrong.
RJ:She will say, this is bad.
RJ:Take it out.
RJ:Okay.
Tom:So it sounds like you've got like a really strong team uh, with you,
Tom:with Jenny and with Ed, your agent.
Tom:Do you have any beta readers before it gets to them?
Tom:Cause I know some authors have either peers or just close friends
Tom:that they have for initial feedback or is that just straight to Jenny?
RJ:I do have beta readers that read most of my stuff.
RJ:They don't always read it before Jenny.
RJ:Just because sometimes I don't finish it until the day it's meant to get to Jenny.
RJ:A lot of us do that.
RJ:But I have three and they've read my stuff for a long time.
RJ:Since before I was published.
RJ:And I like that cause they know me.
RJ:I know what they think and I know how they think.
RJ:And I know a lot of the stuff, they say I ignore.
RJ:ignore.
RJ:They know that.
RJ:Because I know what fascinates them and they're very particular
RJ:readers and I like that.
RJ:They pick me up on stuff.
RJ:And one of them my friend, Matt.
RJ:I would go and play badminton with and he would let me talk
RJ:stories at him, which brilliant.
RJ:And when we're playing, I just sort of come to the net and go, and then
RJ:what happens is and I'd talk at him and he'd sort of talk back to me.
RJ:And I think that was a really good way of me working out stories.
RJ:In fact, in The Bone Ships, there's a creature called a gullaime, which is
RJ:like an avian wizard that can control the wind, very useful to sailing ships.
RJ:And that's entirely Matt, because I'd been explaining to him how
RJ:this was a world where there are only birds, there's no mammals.
Tom:Yeah.
RJ:And there's also these wizards that can control the wind.
RJ:And we were coming out of badminton and he said, I love the idea of the
RJ:bird wizards that control the wind.
RJ:And I was like, no Matt, that is not what I said.
RJ:Birds and wizards that control the wind.
RJ:But by the time I come home, I had this amazing idea for the these bird wizards.
RJ:Yeah.
RJ:And I when I told him about them, he really liked it.
RJ:So that's where they came from.
RJ:And that's why the third book's dedicated to him.
RJ:Yeah.
RJ:He gave me the idea and then..
RJ:Having people to bounce stuff off is really useful.
RJ:Writers groups are really useful and I'm not sold on the use of going to a
RJ:learning to write thing in and of itself.
RJ:But the fact that you go to them and you meet other people doing the same thing.
RJ:I think that's immensely useful.
RJ:I think being around people who do it is actually more useful
RJ:than going and listening to someone telling you how to do it.
RJ:Which I'm never sure you can get that much out.
RJ:I know when it started, I don't think they were really very helpful talks.
RJ:I did a couple of just before got published and there were quite
RJ:helpful, just in letting me hear somebody talk about how they're write.
RJ:And being able to think yeah, I'm doing that, but I'm doing it this way.
RJ:And that I think when you start off, it's really about trying lots of
RJ:different ways, see which works for you.
RJ:And until you finally get it into your head, that no one knows what the doing.
RJ:You can make some terrible mistakes.
Tom:That's the exact purpose of this podcast.
Tom:Is that I'm not an aspiring writer, but I know many.
Tom:And it's just, yeah, having an outlet where you can have professional authors
Tom:all say, yeah, we have no idea what we're doing, but we all have no idea
Tom:what we're doing in different ways.
RJ:And everything you do is just tricks to get you to sit in front
RJ:of a computer and type stories.
Tom:Yeah.
RJ:It's just about some, someone was saying to me that they
RJ:do masses of world-building.
RJ:And someone else would say, RJ doesn't think you need to do that.
RJ:And that's not what I say, I don't think I need to do that at all.
RJ:But if doing that is what gives you the confidence to sit down and
RJ:think right, I can write a book now, then that's what you need to do.
RJ:And I'm an idiot, I just sit down and write a book.
RJ:It is probably not the best way of doing it.
RJ:Especially not when you get to the end and realize that you've not
RJ:made notes for all these things you have to remember for two more books.
Tom:Yeah.
Tom:Well, You've still got the book.
Tom:So you still got that note.
Tom:um.
RJ:Yeah, yeah, but that means reading it again, and by the time it
RJ:goes out, you're really sick of it.
Tom:Yeah.
Tom:But it's just, my hope with this podcast is that because
Tom:everyone's different, someone will listen to more than one episode.
Tom:You listened to a few and disagree with some, and then they'll find someone
Tom:who goes, oh, they write like I do.
Tom:Or they think that I do.
Tom:And the more people I interview, the more the podcast has all these variable
Tom:styles that hopefully long-term listeners will find someone that resonates.
Tom:That's my dream.
RJ:I do a thing called Writeopolis with two other writers called Kit
RJ:Power, who's a horror writer and Scott K Andrews, whose like like science fiction.
RJ:He writes TV related books and things like that.
RJ:One of the things we've discovered, cause we talk to writers and we've
RJ:talked to people around and in the industry and people write different
RJ:things like TV and stuff like that.
RJ:Is it's about finding what gives you the joy in doing it.
RJ:And if you're sitting down and just enjoying doing it,
RJ:you're never wasting it.
RJ:It doesn't matter if it's published or not.
RJ:Cause you might be six months away from publishing.
RJ:You might be five years away from publishing, but if you're
RJ:enjoying it you're learning.
RJ:And the enjoyment of it will teach you that you enjoy doing that thing.
RJ:So you'll do that thing more.
RJ:And that's how we're trying to think of everything.
RJ:I wish I could tell myself, I enjoy jogging.
RJ:That didn't stick, that didn't even stick a little bit.
Tom:Um, one thing I do want to jump to, cause you did say earlier when
Tom:you were writing the second Bone Ships book that there's some anxiety
Tom:because the launch of the first one.
Tom:Have you ever had like severe imposter syndrome where it's just, I can't write.
Tom:Someone's going to find that actually, I'm just a pile of shit and I'm
Tom:never going to get published again.
Tom:And if so, how did you deal with that?
RJ:I think some level of imposter syndrome is constant and I'm
RJ:suspicious of people who would just say yes, I'm fantastic.
RJ:I can do that.
RJ:Because it took me a long time to realize that the more sure
RJ:someone is they're right, the more likely it is they're an idiot.
RJ:Because it's the people that go, well I'm not really sure but it could be this.
RJ:They're still questioning everything.
RJ:And people who question things are learning and doing interesting stuff.
RJ:People who are sure, they've stopped.
RJ:So it's always there.
RJ:It's a very difficult thing to answer because I'm not an anxious
RJ:person or a stressy person.
RJ:But being a writer is a weird career because you're, you are
RJ:always aware it could just stop.
RJ:The next book could come out and no one might buy it.
RJ:In which case it will stop.
RJ:You will have to, well, it won't stop you, you'll have to reinvent yourself
RJ:and come under another name and come back and do something different.
RJ:But I also, I think that imposter syndrome drives me.
RJ:I've said before that I think there's within me there is a much better
RJ:writer than me, and he's always just over the hill and I'm chasing him.
RJ:And I'm always chasing him and trying to catch him and write better.
RJ:And that's why I think you can tell at quite an early stage
RJ:if you cut out for it or not.
RJ:If you get comments, is your reaction, oh my God, I'm destroyed?
RJ:Or is your reaction, well no, I'm going to show you?
RJ:Because that's always my reaction.
RJ:I never hear no, I hear not yet.
Tom:Right.
RJ:It's a fine line being a writer.
RJ:It's like a tight rope between the massive arrogance of standing up and going now,
RJ:I'm not only good at telling stories.
RJ:I'm good enough that you should pay me money for it.
RJ:That's how good I am.
RJ:And you need to believe that.
Tom:Yeah.
RJ:Because especially when you start, no one else is gonna.
RJ:And also, at the same time thinking I do however need some
RJ:help and maybe I'm rubbish.
RJ:And because those two bits fighting allow you to do it.
RJ:Because if you won't take any, if you won't take any editorial advice
RJ:there's a number of authors you can check out, who've stopped taking
RJ:editorial advice and you could tell.
RJ:You read the books and they become self-indulgent or just Because it's a
RJ:necessary part of it for 90% of us, 95%.
RJ:Nearly all of us.
RJ:To have that sort of pushback on what you do.
RJ:I never feel like I know what I'm doing.
RJ:I always think the book I've delivered to my editor is the
RJ:worst thing I've ever written.
RJ:Every single time.
RJ:Because I did it with, I handed in my newest book and said to Jenny
RJ:said, this is a terrible book.
RJ:You can hate it, it's not very good.
RJ:And she turned around and said, you do know you said that for every
RJ:single one of The Bone Ships books.
RJ:And I was oh, did I?
RJ:I thought they were quite good when I handed in.
RJ:And she said, no you said they were awful.
RJ:Cause you self edit in your mind, in my mind, I handed in the Bone Ships, and
RJ:I was like, Bone Ships, it's brilliant.
RJ:They're going to love it.
RJ:But actually I went, It's a bit long.
RJ:Not much happens for the first half of the book.
RJ:It's just people talking.
RJ:It might be terrible.
RJ:So yeah, I'm very aware that there's a really sure of themselves person inside
RJ:me, and there's is also a really, oh my God it's rubbish, person at the same time.
Tom:Well, I think you mentioned earlier, a great bit of advice, which is that
Tom:you give yourself permission to be shit.
Tom:And I think that is definitely when writing first drafts, a lot
Tom:of people get anxiety paralysis.
Tom:Where they can't think of the best way of phrasing it, so they
Tom:don't write anything at all.
Tom:And it's just write what you can in the way that you can
Tom:and worry about revision later.
Tom:It can always be better.
Tom:Don't worry about it being shit.
RJ:I've quite often not found the voice of the book until I finished it.
RJ:The stuff that handed into Jenny and then went straight into the second book
RJ:and I wrote 20,000 word or something.
RJ:I always overestimate what I've written.
RJ:Then I go back to it like three months later and find out I've written 5,000
RJ:words and I'm really disappointed.
RJ:I thought I had a lot less work.
RJ:But it was only writing those bits in the second book that I suddenly
RJ:realized something that really needed to be in the first book.
RJ:So I'm quite glad publishing is slow.
RJ:But don't expect, you don't know what that thing is going
RJ:to be until, till it is a thing.
Tom:Yeah.
RJ:And then when it is a thing, you can make a better thing.
Tom:And do you feel that you've progressed as an author?
Tom:Do you feel that with all these books that have been published and have sold
Tom:quite well, that you've grown as a writer, have you consciously learnt
Tom:things from each book that you've written?
RJ:No.
RJ:That's not what you're expecting was it?
RJ:I can tell from your face.
RJ:You were not expecting that.
RJ:No.
RJ:I've not learned anything, consciously.
RJ:I've undoubtedly learned a lot unconsciously.
RJ:And the reviews are getting better.
RJ:There's some critical reviews are getting better for each book as they
RJ:go along, so I'm doing stuff but I never think about the process.
RJ:I just do it.
Tom:Yeah.
RJ:I don't ever put myself in a position where I'm thinking, wow.
RJ:I'll tell you something I do do.
RJ:Is that there's things that I think I'm not going to do.
RJ:Like second person, I just bounce straight off and decide I'm
RJ:never gonna do, don't like it.
RJ:But there is second person writing in the book that I've just written.
RJ:And also, I, I don't particularly get multi-point of view books.
RJ:I like one, one point of view, but the next thing I do is going to be
RJ:like three or four points of view.
RJ:I think there's something in the back of my head that just
RJ:goes, yeah, push yourself.
RJ:Just this thing you don't think you like, see if you can make yourself like it.
RJ:Just have a go and see.
RJ:I think I am always wanting to try new things.
RJ:I'm very conscious of a wish to be a better writer than I am.
Tom:Pursuing the better writer over the hill.
RJ:Yeah.
Tom:Yeah.
RJ:I wish he'd stopped running.
RJ:He clearly, jogging stuck with him and it didn't with me.
RJ:Like, I'm here going, please slow down.
RJ:Please slow down a bit.
RJ:But I want to be better, but I don't, I'm not the sort of person
RJ:that can read a book about how to write and then take that away.
RJ:I have to do it.
RJ:And fail spectacularly.
RJ:That starts how I learn.
RJ:I learn by doing, not by listening to other people or
RJ:watching videos or any of that.
RJ:It doesn't sit in my head at all.
RJ:I just forget it.
Tom:And so is there anything that you would love to achieve in the future with
Tom:your, you said there that multi points of view is something that you've veered
Tom:away from, but is there anything else or maybe a different genre perhaps,
Tom:or is that just a stylistic thing?
Tom:Maybe a different medium like a screenplay or a comic book or
Tom:something like that, that you would really aspire to do in the future?
RJ:I don't know, cause I just, I'm a very live in the now person.
RJ:This is what I'm doing at this moment.
RJ:I'm excited by it.
RJ:I am talking with a friend about doing a screenplay of the Mal and Jackie books.
RJ:Seeing what we can get, see if we can get any interest in that.
RJ:Just cause that I like TV crime.
RJ:I'd like to see that.
RJ:But it's all, you're aware of how very unrealistic it is to expect to
RJ:get something of yours on television.
RJ:It's just not going to happen.
RJ:My fantasy is never going to be on television.
RJ:I was talking to my agent about it and just went, I see you've
RJ:sold quite a lot of TV rights.
RJ:Then they went, yeah, they don't write unfilmable books, RJ.
RJ:You should think about that.
RJ:Hmm.
RJ:Big ships too expensive.
RJ:But I can't, I'd like to write a science fiction novel
RJ:because I like science fiction.
RJ:And I've written one.
RJ:My first book that was good enough to sell, but didn't quite
RJ:was a sense of fiction novel.
RJ:And I went back to it and it wasn't, I'm glad it didn't sell.
RJ:Didn't like it.
RJ:And I'd like to write more crime.
RJ:Just like to write really.
RJ:I remember I used to play in bands and I realized that I was a terrible
RJ:musician but I really enjoyed doing it.
RJ:And eventually I was in a band that were just so far out
RJ:stripping my meager abilities I just said, look, I'm stopping now.
RJ:This isn't me.
RJ:And I thought, what can I do?
RJ:What do I love?
RJ:And I had a book in my pocket.
RJ:I thought well I love books.
RJ:I've always loved books.
RJ:So I decided that I was going to be a writer.
RJ:I knew from that moment, the absolute astronomical odds of becoming a
RJ:writer and how really unlikely it was.
RJ:Cause I was, I wasn't gonna be a self published writer.
RJ:I was going to be a writer signed to a big publisher.
RJ:That was what I was going to do.
RJ:And that was what I decided straight off, not there's anything
RJ:wrong with self publishing.
RJ:I just know I'd be really bad at it because I'm not thorough.
RJ:You have to be really thorough.
RJ:So I, and also, as I mentioned, didn't exactly go to school cause I was
RJ:going to be a rock star, obviously.
RJ:Didn't need to go to school.
RJ:That, that was a miscalculation on my part.
RJ:And so I wrote, and I read a lot and I kept writing and reading a
RJ:lot and writing and reading a lot.
RJ:And it took me a long time, 10, 12 years.
RJ:But eventually I ended up with a book signed to a big publisher and I've
RJ:never not been aware of how astoundingly unlikely it is to be in that position.
RJ:I've already won.
RJ:There isn't a place for me to go that makes it bad than it already is
RJ:because the guy who barely went to school is somehow published writer.
Tom:Award-winning published writer.
RJ:Award-winning published writer.
RJ:And they called The Bone Ships literary fantasy.
RJ:Yes.
RJ:Yes.
RJ:Literature, don't you know?
RJ:I'm sure actual literature has been laughing its socks off, but but yeah,
RJ:I'm never not aware of how amazing it is and that I was really ill and that
RJ:kind of knocked me out for five years.
RJ:I had to start again.
RJ:So it's just, everything is just honey.
RJ:When the first book came out, it just, it changed my life entirely.
RJ:And I just said to my wife, it doesn't matter if this is the only
RJ:book I've published, it happened.
RJ:We just had the most amazing year of our life, but it just
RJ:continuing and I'm amazed.
Tom:That's great.
RJ:My life is full of joy.
RJ:Just That's all it is.
Tom:Well, I was going to say that is a wonderful place to wrap it
Tom:up of just live in the moment.
Tom:Allow yourself to be shit.
Tom:Surround yourself with good people.
Tom:And it can always be better.
Tom:And chase your future self over the hill.
Tom:And Vimto, we've covered it all.
RJ:Yeah, we have.
Tom:RJ.
Tom:It's been an absolute pleasure.
Tom:Thank you very much.
RJ:It's been lovely.
RJ:Thanks Tom.
Tom:And that was the real writing process of RJ Barker.
Tom:He's a lovely man and he should read more of his books.
Tom:You can tell he's quite proud of The Bone Ships, but you should pick up a copy of A
Tom:Numbers Game under his pen name, RJ Dark.
Tom:It's a solid thriller and the sequel is now available for Kindle download.
Tom:I appreciate not everyone likes Amazon, but if you have Kindle unlimited, you can
Tom:get both Mal and Jackie books for free.
Tom:So deal with that information.
Tom:However you see fit.
Tom:And if you want more of his general random musings, he's very active on
Tom:Twitter and producing some good stuff.
Tom:So worth follow.
Tom:Uh, I'm not going to try and pronounce his Twitter handle though.
Tom:It doesn't have enough vowles.
Tom:I'm sure it's an in-joke reference or something.
Tom:It will be in the show notes, however.
Tom:Also in the show notes is a link to my Kofi page.
Tom:If you'd like to support the show by paying £1 or more, that would be lovely.
Tom:There's a bunch of extra bonus content coming very, very soon.
Tom:And you get episodes like this one nice and early.
Tom:And, uh, that's it.
Tom:Next week's guest is a pretty big one.
Tom:So keep an eye out for that.
Tom:Uh, so until then, Thanks for listening.
Tom:And may you always keep writing, until the world ends.